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Thread: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    thanks dude, preciate
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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    reminded me of some jedi mind type shit.. shit was cool, def lyrical. i didn't really like how you dragged out the pronoucation of some of the words but everybody is different. beat was cool, i would of liked to see an epic ass hook on this song.. but it obviously never came ha. overall good song bro 4/5

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    thanks bro, yeha hopefully since i put this up it seems to have got the fellas going in wanting to get it actually done
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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    I liked it man, it was short but packed a strong message, somthn to really stick ur teeth into and come back wit a lil knowledge at the some time...good stuff, always like hearing some creative tracks, good work

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    listening...beats nice...atmosphere ish...your delivery fits nice..angery but its nice... lyrics got some depth...wont argue... you were going for blood, its nice tho....and the beats dope as fuck...all in all for one verse its nice...had me hopeing for a hook...

    good shit man do your thing

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    checking this.....nice intro...feeling the emotion....flow ain't too bad a lil shaky at some points some dubs seem off too....energy is good though, good lyrics too

    overall pretty good verse man keep dropppin

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    thanks yall, good feeds
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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    that beat is tough. firstly your delivery was dope here, lyrics were pretty dope, i'd say decent at least. would have liked to hear a hook.

    my only criticism lies in the content, even though you delivered it well and sounded sincere and informed, the concept is just played out to me now. america is a warmongering, evil dictatorship etc...i would have liked to at least hear something a bit more original on this topic than what you presented in this verse, but it is unfinished, and i'm definitely gonna come back around to check out the completed version.

    good drop dude, stay up

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    Re: "America Terrorists" (Unfinished - 1 Verse)

    Great intro use
    I think more emotion would help as you are speaking some real ish you are speaking. Most part the delivery was good for the track

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