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ok.
ok.
mack's new years resolution was to champ FL..
man..thats alot to ask for, this sad queer be boastin'
keep ya head up cuz you got anotha bad year approachin'
victim of a lyrical kidapping watch how my rhymes snatch ya
Ill-mackzimus, emmaqualte,
ya bars come up short for tryin to be like the grind time rapper
torture mental mack ya might flip,try to out spit'll break ya jaw loosely
scorch ya credentials,the shit i write can script another saw movie
you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
faggot stop talking like u mack cuz even the hoes knows hes Fem
remind you d howard in the dunk contest,how this cup-cake blows on rims
He only punishes kids by spanking them but lyrically he never kicks ass
His shit's trash, so this first round is a stage we'll never see this freak pass
You aint a lyrical wizard, they call you pun but your wordplay is pure crap
So i suggest you conjure Christopher Rios' ghost to help write your raps
This 'saila' doesnt 'know the ropes', so he'll never be a champ or get high ranks
He's just gonna keep biting dust after i shove his face in a sandbank
I aint bragging but i know im cute, so getting chicks to me aint a hard task
But Punisher's a ugly sadist who keeps hiding his scarred face behind a mask
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
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This battle didnt have too many highlights to me... Punisher landed a few more punches than his opponent. Doesnt seem like Ill stepped up to the occasion, couldve came a little harder. no hate
torture mental mack ya might flip,try to out spit'll break ya jaw loosely
scorch ya credentials,the shit i write can script another saw movie
Vs
You aint a lyrical wizard, they call you pun but your wordplay is pure crap
So i suggest you conjure Christopher Rios' ghost to help write your raps
V/Pun
^You can't vote. I want you as my next opponent...
anyway
man..thats alot to ask for, this sad queer be boastin'
keep ya head up cuz you got anotha bad year approachin'
nope
victim of a lyrical kidapping watch how my rhymes snatch ya
Ill-mackzimus, emmaqualte,
ya bars come up short for tryin to be like the grind time rapper
didnt rhyme, didnt get it either
torture mental mack ya might flip,try to out spit'll break ya jaw loosely
scorch ya credentials,the shit i write can script another saw movie
self glory, you are nor dissing your opponent
you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
ok, first real bar
faggot stop talking like u mack cuz even the hoes knows hes Fem
remind you d howard in the dunk contest,how this cup-cake blows on rims
nah weak
vs
He only punishes kids by spanking them but lyrically he never kicks ass
His shit's trash, so this first round is a stage we'll never see this freak pass
weak, but i get the concept
You aint a lyrical wizard, they call you pun but your wordplay is pure crap
So i suggest you conjure Christopher Rios' ghost to help write your raps
decent
This 'saila' doesnt 'know the ropes', so he'll never be a champ or get high ranks
He's just gonna keep biting dust after i shove his face in a sandbank
nah weak
I aint bragging but i know im cute, so getting chicks to me aint a hard task
But Punisher's a ugly sadist who keeps hiding his scarred face behind a mask
decent
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
didnt rhyme, weak closer
I have Mack taking this because he was more consistent. His misses hit harder too and Pun came little statementish.
v/ Mack
Take a Look at my Life
man..thats alot to ask for, this sad queer be boastin'
keep ya head up cuz you got anotha bad year approachin'
no too simple, expand ur wordplay homie..
victim of a lyrical kidapping watch how my rhymes snatch ya
Ill-mackzimus, emmaqualte,
ya bars come up short for tryin to be like the grind time rapper
this was decent i get the reference
torture mental mack ya might flip,try to out spit'll break ya jaw loosely
scorch ya credentials,the shit i write can script another saw movie
ehh..
you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
decent
faggot stop talking like u mack cuz even the hoes knows hes Fem
remind you d howard in the dunk contest,how this cup-cake blows on rims
weak..
vs.
He only punishes kids by spanking them but lyrically he never kicks ass
His shit's trash, so this first round is a stage we'll never see this freak pass
statement..
You aint a lyrical wizard, they call you pun but your wordplay is pure crap
So i suggest you conjure Christopher Rios' ghost to help write your raps
better..
This 'saila' doesnt 'know the ropes', so he'll never be a champ or get high ranks
He's just gonna keep biting dust after i shove his face in a sandbank
not bad
I aint bragging but i know im cute, so getting chicks to me aint a hard task
But Punisher's a ugly sadist who keeps hiding his scarred face behind a mask
ok
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
good closer
v- punisher. maximus has the concepts down to write some solid punches but they come off too statementish. Punisher was much more consistent overall in this one.
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you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
^^^ lmao at that line... that shit aint gone be convenient when u gotta clean it up u dirtbag lol
yo when i first read puns verse i figured it was a wrap an he was gettin bodied...but then ill dropped an even worse verse sumhow beyond my own personal comprehension tbh, out of the 2 "quotes" i use that term loosely i enjoyed puns more an think the rest of his drop was more solid as a whole
v punisher
this guy aint a monster, all he is a Rat-O-Min(e)
this guy couldnt be hot, even if he sat on nines
he better not want a W cause im handing him L's
open up a can of whoop ass, like im canning him belts
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victim of a lyrical kidapping watch how my rhymes snatch ya
Ill-mackzimus, emmaqualte,
ya bars come up short for tryin to be like the grind time rapper
vs
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
this was an ok battle. i felt ill had some ok lines but they coulda been done so much better. pun had more hits overall and a better verse.
v/pun
man..thats alot to ask for, this sad queer be boastin'
keep ya head up cuz you got anotha bad year approachin'
weak opener
victim of a lyrical kidapping watch how my rhymes snatch ya
Ill-mackzimus, emmaqualte,
ya bars come up short for tryin to be like the grind time rapper
not feeling the wording on this
torture mental mack ya might flip,try to out spit'll break ya jaw loosely
scorch ya credentials,the shit i write can script another saw movie
weak
you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
played concept
faggot stop talking like u mack cuz even the hoes knows hes Fem
remind you d howard in the dunk contest,how this cup-cake blows on rims
could have been worded better but ok
vs
He only punishes kids by spanking them but lyrically he never kicks ass
His shit's trash, so this first round is a stage we'll never see this freak pass
could have been better
You aint a lyrical wizard, they call you pun but your wordplay is pure crap
So i suggest you conjure Christopher Rios' ghost to help write your raps
not feeling this
This 'saila' doesnt 'know the ropes', so he'll never be a champ or get high ranks
He's just gonna keep biting dust after i shove his face in a sandbank
weak line
I aint bragging but i know im cute, so getting chicks to me aint a hard task
But Punisher's a ugly sadist who keeps hiding his scarred face behind a mask
not feeling this
You aint this raw, u just an amateur who doesnt know the art of war
So call this an easy win cause with 'convenience' i'll leave P on the floor.....
played nameplay
1 good line vs 0. vote pun
you aint striking fear in me,u loud but not saying shit cuz u lack thunder
his flow messy n ya bars body structure isnt on point..you need acupuncture
^^^Meh...being generous here because it was the only ok attempt you had!
vs
Nothin
v/Pun
Pun came really weak in this battle but Mack somehow came even weaker. The P on the floor line was a terrible flip on a played concept. The quoted bar was the only semi-decent bar in this battle so Pun picks up the win for that.
v/Pun
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