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She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
Inn
When I'm in the ring i black out , I'm the champ cuz all I do is win nigga
You'll never be seen as king Kai , after this battle u'll be wit dead lol like him nigga
..... another guy throwing a match to mordycai?
A football reference versus... poop. Shit. Geez.
Vote- Mordycai. And a recommendation to see why that lls guy made it to a championship round of anything word related.
-VOTE DQ'd
Last edited by KnowP; November 30th, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Mordycai - Pretty solid bar. I liked the concept. Stiff jab.
lls - First thing I have to point out is the repetive rhyme scheme. That was some 2chainz-ass-schemework. I would have prefered a single sylabble rhyme. But that punch? +1 For Nostalgia. That was a hook to the body..even if it was a somewhat sloppy one.
This is a tough call. On one side you have a decent concept with decent execution. On the other; you have a nice DBZ reference...that could have been flipped better. At the end ofthe day, its about the more impactful shot.
Vote - lls
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1-0 uppping
weak champ match. expected more from both here. mordy had a blah punch while lls had a slow jab but atleast was a better attempt.
v. lls
Ehh wasn't strong as I thought but I ones was a tad bit better In my opinion . v/ lls
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