celph(0-3) vs foul(3-2) CELPH WINS

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 9

10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due THURSDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.

[Alphabet]

lol @God of War we battled last week g...

[Foul]

uhhhhhhhhh..

[Foul]

check. 10

[Celph Taut]

Bare minimum, alright.

[Foul]

lol thinks hes worth more than 10

@..Celph Taut


quick to clap you, you wack bro, When my gat rings say hello
u dont have even 1 K.O.,cuz Making a long distance call is the only time celph owns
his names a contradiction thinks he spits raw but lives on the internet
this whole forums full of narcissists and not 1 person has shown self interest
special ed audio head actin hardened all like yo "dont let my trigger get started"
so if hes really self taught then that clearly explains why this niggas retarded
been here since 06,never held a belt, n says hes recordin ghetto vinyls
we could jam to Army of the pharoahs n still wouldn't hear that Celph titled
You never even had a chick sit on ur dick, believe me you suck
IF a female was ever on celph ish she was just bein greedy as fuck

[Celph Taut]

I don't see how anyone can really think your rhyming's a factor
Your life's one big American Horror Story, minus the actors...
I don't think washed up is a term that I can describe you, whore...
You're the water park, with the lifeguard, pool, and the diving board...
Your lines are poor, n' it's not for me to prey on the weak..
But I almost battled Alphabet twice, to face a guy who can barely use it in every day speech...
Your small run is ended, yeah, I can rip you to pieces, cunt...
You're mighty territorial for a fag who can't map a decent punch...
So, to keep it blunt? You haven't beaten nobody nice...
...I'll be all over Monoply's board, without rolling a dice...

[The Great Father]

I do not regard what anyone else from this point says, but this was the most enjoyable battle I've read on here in a while. When punches were thrown, they were neat and to the point with dashes of creativity. This would have been a tie.

What separates it o Mister Great Father, you both may ask?

Rapping about using guns is terribly trite and played out. Foul's first bar was the losing factor.

19 groovy lines and one bad one. Too bad for Monopoly Money that he was the owner of that one bad line.

Thank you both for providing me something worthwhile of reading since most battles on here bore the piss out of me.


The Great Father, the father of both of you, decrees a vote for-

Celph Taut.


Sons, I am proud of you both.

[Smog]

quick to clap you, you wack bro, When my gat rings say hello
u dont have even 1 K.O.,cuz Making a long distance call is the only time celph owns
Not great kinda weak
his names a contradiction thinks he spits raw but lives on the internet
this whole forums full of narcissists and not 1 person has shown self interest
Lol, pretty nice
special ed audio head actin hardened all like yo "dont let my trigger get started"
so if hes really self taught then that clearly explains why this niggas retarded
Lol good punch
been here since 06,never held a belt, n says hes recordin ghetto vinyls
we could jam to Army of the pharoahs n still wouldn't hear that Celph titled
Lol, ok
You never even had a chick sit on ur dick, believe me you suck
IF a female was ever on celph ish she was just bein greedy as fuck
Good hit

Vs.....

I don't see how anyone can really think your rhyming's a factor
Your life's one big American Horror Story, minus the actors...
Ehhh not that good
I don't think washed up is a term that I can describe you, whore...
You're the water park, with the lifeguard, pool, and the diving board...
Lol, damn that's funny, good fuckin punch
Your lines are poor, n' it's not for me to prey on the weak..
But I almost battled Alphabet twice, to face a guy who can barely use it in every day speech...
Ok not to good
Your small run is ended, yeah, I can rip you to pieces, cunt...
You're mighty territorial for a fag who can't map a decent punch...
Ok at best
So, to keep it blunt? You haven't beaten nobody nice...
...I'll be all over Monoply's board, without rolling a dice...
Pretty good punch,

This is close, both had a couple pretty solid hits, but celphs rhyme scheme made it sound smoother, the watermark line was great, IMO I think it could go either way but imma give it to celph for a cleaner verse

[Amen]

his names a contradiction thinks he spits raw but lives on the internet
this whole forums full of narcissists and not 1 person has shown self interest

vs

Your small run is ended, yeah, I can rip you to pieces, cunt...
You're mighty territorial for a fag who can't map a decent punch...

Battle's extremely close, IMO. Nothing really stood out other then the bars quoted. If I compare the bars in regards to creativity, harshness, witty'ness. I'd have to say, punch to punch. Celph took it, IMO. But overall, I think Foul did a pretty decent job, struggled to execute on a lot of his concepts. I think he could have expanded and went deeper with the Self Taught/Retarded concept but he kept it basic. You could have at least added some kind of harsh humor too it, feel me? Celph - He always has concepts, but struggles to execute them. Add some harshness to your concepts dude, they for the most part are witty most of the time but they lack the proper execution.

IMO, Celph edges this.

[_Lyrics]

special ed audio head actin hardened all like yo "dont let my trigger get started"
so if hes really self taught then that clearly explains why this niggas retarded
Lol blunt, but funny
Not a bad verse, nit many mechanics, but the punches were there and some lines hit with some decency

Vs

Your lines are poor, n' it's not for me to prey on the weak..
But I almost battled Alphabet twice, to face a guy who can barely use it in every day speech...
Lmao nice
Yeah this was regular celph, definitely more hits than misses and the mechanics were tight as far as flow and structure.

Celph takes this pretty easy
V/celph