http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Leave-Me-Alone
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-my-grind-guys!!
Joseph Grey, me, the rapper.... featuring Derek Bahos, the singer performing our song "Jessica Alba".
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Leave-Me-Alone
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-my-grind-guys!!
Joseph Grey, me, the rapper.... featuring Derek Bahos, the singer performing our song "Jessica Alba".
That was a nice video you did. Im not quite sure what kind of audience you were aiming for, but I guess you were just venting feelings bout some chick that wasn't like Jessica Alba. It reminds me of a mixture of Atmosphere and Eminem. I thought the lyrics and flow was kind of basic or leaning towards the commercial side of rap. Good track overall, but not really my style.
video production looks solid. diggint the guitar but it sounds a little too distorty. Writtens aight. But something about it im not feeling, like the rhymes word but are sounding a little on the forced side. But you do it so consistently it feels like thats how its supposed to be lol. distorts when you say slut you aint jessica alba.
But overall this wasnt bad. Im sure someone will like it.
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
I like the mix and the emotion on this. sounds real man. couldnt hop on the hook but that's just me man. keep it up. you def are going somewhere man
Real Classic to me...................keep up the good work
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