LLL Week 8: Champ Match- Smog 6-1 vs. Letterman 5-0 - LETTERMAN WINS

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[Letterman]

@Smog how many?

[Smog]

What up man, 16?

[Smog]

18 sent @Letterman

[Letterman]

Vs Smog

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
This match light. Imma toy with him while he tries 2 end me
But everyone knows not 2 play with fire.. & Smog's verses are certified child friendly
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
U had a fire verse last week. Well.. some vets had to combust it
So no wonder you beat Sik, u had enough aids to leave Magic Johnson disgusted
Me & your bitch always argue. U dont hit so I gotta cut bruh
She tells me to pipe down, then I put my dick in her mouth til she shuts the fuck up
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life
U top tier? Well this the only title clash you'll be around
& we'll see smog in a great depression, after I make his stock crash into the ground

[Smog]

U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
Don't talk Pussy, u cheat n think it's cute when Dudes call u lazy Let,
No Ambition, drive, passion or desire.. N u expect us to believe u gettin Ladies wet
This ain't a battle, it's the difference of man n kid..
See I got it all n SOME...U still scroungin up change for a bag of chips..
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
^ain't even the half that's gay..while cats were provin ur wack Replays
They Completely spaced that Quasimodo joint.....n how u BIT it offa Patrick Stay..
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with
Quit sayin if u snooze on me ull lose, when bein shook ups the truth
Cuz the only thing bein slept on...Is the curb after my FUCKIN hook touches U..

[Attack of the Muff]

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
(this is creative. I like this)
This match light. Imma toy with him while he tries 2 end me
But everyone knows not 2 play with fire.. & Smog's verses are certified child friendly
(not feeling this one tbh. the concept or anything)
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
(i like the wp but the idea of suffocating someone w/ aersol sound weird but its ok)
Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
(this is sick)
U had a fire verse last week. Well.. some vets had to combust it
So no wonder you beat Sik, u had enough aids to leave Magic Johnson disgusted
(come on this is playrd tho. i had a line similar to this recently but on ncs tho)
Me & your bitch always argue. U dont hit so I gotta cut bruh
She tells me to pipe down, then I put my dick in her mouth til she shuts the fuck up
(pretty good)
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
(ehh. attempt didn't grab me)
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life
(lol nice)
U top tier? Well this the only title clash you'll be around
& we'll see smog in a great depression, after I make his stock crash into the ground
(nah. played)

up n down . ive seen better but it was still a good drop had its heaters but its misses also



U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up
(oh nice start i like how were going w/ this)
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
(lmaoooo dam)
Don't talk Pussy, u cheat n think it's cute when Dudes call u lazy Let,
No Ambition, drive, passion or desire.. N u expect us to believe u gettin Ladies wet
(eh he don't really brag about bitches but conceptually this ok)
This ain't a battle, it's the difference of man n kid..
See I got it all n SOME...U still scroungin up change for a bag of chips..
(eh didn't feel the angle of this)
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
(IM FKN DEAD)
^ain't even the half that's gay..while cats were provin ur wack Replays
They Completely spaced that Quasimodo joint.....n how u BIT it offa Patrick Stay..
(huh but no one put it out there. ion remember ppl syin its bitten)
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
(nice)
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with
(DOPE ..id give lm a o to lmao whattttttt this is nuts)
Quit sayin if u snooze on me ull lose, when bein shook ups the truth
Cuz the only thing bein slept on...Is the curb after my FUCKIN hook touches U..
(nAWWW)

cool battle

let me count quotes. this was allover the place

5-4 smog


v/smog by a quote. yall both went in tho

[Lenox]

Letterman: ridiculousness, aerosol.. Pipe down, high stepping...

Vs

Smog: bye week, champ FL, Patrick stat.. Resusin again..

Vote: this was a fire ass battle yo.. Ima be honest.. I wasn't expecting it to be THIS fucking dope.. Yall tied with quotes.. Wording was nice with both.. But I still felt like lett had better misses.. Idk.. This was a really cool read tho. Lett got this

[A. Diction]

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
--- OK....
This match light. Imma toy with him while he tries 2 end me
But everyone knows not 2 play with fire.. & Smog's verses are certified child friendly
--- OK......
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
--- noiiice......
Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
--- nope, played concept no matter how u flip it.....
U had a fire verse last week. Well.. some vets had to combust it
So no wonder you beat Sik, u had enough aids to leave Magic Johnson disgusted
--- nope, see above........
Me & your bitch always argue. U dont hit so I gotta cut bruh
She tells me to pipe down, then I put my dick in her mouth til she shuts the fuck up
--- OK but light........
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
--- miss imo..........
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life
--- lol aite.........
U top tier? Well this the only title clash you'll be around
& we'll see smog in a great depression, after I make his stock crash into the ground
--- ehh aite but light.......

Ur verse was consistent jabs with a couple haymakers popping up thru out. Good shit bruh.

Vs.

U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up 
--- nice personal.......
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
---- dayum.........
Don't talk Pussy, u cheat n think it's cute when Dudes call u lazy Let,
No Ambition, drive, passion or desire.. N u expect us to believe u gettin Ladies wet
---- damn u going in so far........
This ain't a battle, it's the difference of man n kid..
See I got it all n SOME...U still scroungin up change for a bag of chips..
--- I don't get the reference, sorry.......
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle 
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
--- thought this woulda been better without the whole metal angle....aite tho.......
^ain't even the half that's gay..while cats were provin ur wack Replays
They Completely spaced that Quasimodo joint.....n how u BIT it offa Patrick Stay..
--- nice peraonal..........
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen 
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
--- lol aite.........
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with
--- ehhh...Imma give u this one but I didn't really like the execution...thought it'd be better if you'd said 'while he tries to figure out what he's supposed to do with it' goes with the set up better imo.........
Quit sayin if u snooze on me ull lose, when bein shook ups the truth 
Cuz the only thing bein slept on...Is the curb after my FUCKIN hook touches U..
--- ehh mediocre flip on the slept on angle, I like as a personal but the execution is lacking....

Overall: this is a nice battle fr. Yall both brought it this week and its close too. Lett had his usual verse with only a miss or two but jabs all the way thru with a couple haymakers spread out. That verse would prob beat most but smog brought the fire. His first three bars were killer. His verse fell off a bit but when u start like that there's only one way to go n that's down. I tgi k smog is at his best when he uses a personal attack n that's what he did here. He had a couple I didn't really like cuz of the execution but they weren't misses.

This a dope battle y'all, props.

V. Smaug

[Amen]

Vs Smog

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
- Light
This match light. Imma toy with him while he tries 2 end me
But everyone knows not 2 play with fire.. & Smog's verses are certified child friendly
- Light
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
- Heavy
Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
- Ehhh concept as a hole is a very dated one... Light flip on it
U had a fire verse last week. Well.. some vets had to combust it
So no wonder you beat Sik, u had enough aids to leave Magic Johnson disgusted
- Lazy execution on a potential heavy personal/haymaker
Me & your bitch always argue. U dont hit so I gotta cut bruh
She tells me to pipe down, then I put my dick in her mouth til she shuts the fuck up
- Light
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
- Light
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life
- Heavy & setup definitely helped this
U top tier? Well this the only title clash you'll be around
& we'll see smog in a great depression, after I make his stock crash into the ground
- Wack

U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up
- Heavy personal
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
- Bang
Don't talk Pussy, u cheat n think it's cute when Dudes call u lazy Let,
No Ambition, drive, passion or desire.. N u expect us to believe u gettin Ladies wet
- Back to back
This ain't a battle, it's the difference of man n kid..
See I got it all n SOME...U still scroungin up change for a bag of chips..
- Trash
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
- Light
^ain't even the half that's gay..while cats were provin ur wack Replays
They Completely spaced that Quasimodo joint.....n how u BIT it offa Patrick Stay..
- Heavy
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
- Light
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with
- Light
Quit sayin if u snooze on me ull lose, when bein shook ups the truth
Cuz the only thing bein slept on...Is the curb after my FUCKIN hook touches U..
- I fuckz w/ this flip on a dated concept tho

Good battle, bros BUT...

Smog got this.

[Aero]

Let:

1 - ridiculousness line was cool, good wording
2 - aiiight, could've been reworded to isolate the smog reference
3 - ok the set up takes away from punch. When you say cans I'm not thinking you mean a can of aerosol. I could've made this ill.
4 - the concept is played very played
5 - nah
6 - pipe down ok
7 - lol cool
8 - played wp but the punch saved it lol
9 - nah & you know better than this


Overall I like your clean non choppy delivery. I don't think the concepts were there this time but props.



Smog:


1 - ok, with some rewording it'd be more effective
2 - again, cool personal just rewording would be more effective
3 - nah
4 - not my fav wording
5 - eh a lil corny
6 - cool
7 - okay
8 - lol I typically don't like letter wps but this was done well
9 - aiiiight

I'm a person that's big on wording and for me the wording wasn't very precise here. Some cool lines though.



Cool battle but Let was cleaner and had better lines


MVGT Letterman

[Notti]

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
this was cool
This match light. Imma toy with him while he tries 2 end me
But everyone knows not 2 play with fire.. & Smog's verses are certified child friendly
nice
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
i like the wordplay, nice
Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
not feelin this
U had a fire verse last week. Well.. some vets had to combust it
So no wonder you beat Sik, u had enough aids to leave Magic Johnson disgusted
lol this was cool
Me & your bitch always argue. U dont hit so I gotta cut bruh
She tells me to pipe down, then I put my dick in her mouth til she shuts the fuck up
nah, not feelin this
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
lmao, this was clever
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life
nice
U top tier? Well this the only title clash you'll be around
& we'll see smog in a great depression, after I make his stock crash into the ground
cool flip on played concept

vs

U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up
lol, cool
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
haha
Don't talk Pussy, u cheat n think it's cute when Dudes call u lazy Let,
No Ambition, drive, passion or desire.. N u expect us to believe u gettin Ladies wet
not feelin this
This ain't a battle, it's the difference of man n kid..
See I got it all n SOME...U still scroungin up change for a bag of chips..
not feelin this either
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
cool jab
^ain't even the half that's gay..while cats were provin ur wack Replays
They Completely spaced that Quasimodo joint.....n how u BIT it offa Patrick Stay..
im not up on this, wish i was
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
lol damn, hard as fuck
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with
smhhh, witty as fuck w/ this
Quit sayin if u snooze on me ull lose, when bein shook ups the truth
Cuz the only thing bein slept on...Is the curb after my FUCKIN hook touches U..
not feelin this either

Overall: damn yo, this is a close ass, hell of a champ match right here. Letterman was consistent as fuck, all the way through for the most part, with jabs and few haymakers here and there. Smog had more misses, but them haymakers were whompers.. im not really sure how to score this one, i think smog may have had more lines of the battle, but i feel like letterman may have jus been too consistant here, ima have to go wit let.

v/letterman

[OG Maestro]

I'll bring gunplay, while u laugh & joke tryna sieze the chip
But keep up with that ridiculousness.. I bet it won't be funny when you see the clip
You'll get sprayed up in ur crib. Got the cans low while I creep
& Aerosol you'll be asking for.. while I'm using that to suffocate you in your sleep
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life'

vs.

U prolly thought fuk had the advantage, a couple weeks to get his lines tuff
But what's Clint, tony b, easy n OG?? That's a FUCKIN bye week since u signed up
Worst triple L title run ever.. FUCK givin letter congrats
When u can't even champ FL.. Cuz the comp there is better than that^
Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"
Ur rep is ruined, even had a second chance to be true wit the pen
But like fiends do so often..... u softened n started REUSIN again
U aint bangin gats or slanging crack u hopeless shit
I'd give LMAO..just to laugh my ass off while he looks fa sump'm to smoke it with

I liked Letterman's verse last week a lot more than this week. A lot of the punches were underwhelming & didn't really make a good hit.
Smog had a highly consistent verse counting about 4 haymakers & all of it was creative. vs. Letterman's 2.
Letterman overall was just out of Smog's league though. Even if I quoted the light light jabs he threw it wouldn't make any sense with the quality in Smog's. Thought this was pretty unbalanced

Vote: Smog

[Evolve]

Beating me wont work out. U never shoulda climbed in the yard
It's ironic.. Letter exercisin the pen, while you're getting ripped behind these bars
That wording DESTROYS ur punches. Swear it fucks up the flows
Cuz ur concepts are a shoe-in to win.. but voters see em & yell "WHAT ARE THOOOOSE?"
I always score w/ ur hoes. I'm the reason ur ex left b4 u wifed
Last time I put the Deion that bitch, she celebrated by high stepping out of your life

vs

Frontin like u love earth, say cars pollute so u pedal a bicycle
Got word I throw away barz.. N said "just give um to me dawg metals recyclable"

decent battle ya'll got here. I got Letters taking it with the LOTB and 2 extra quotables. Plus that shoe-in/what are those joint leaned me.

V/ Letters

[Packed Graves]

letter - opener, aersol, shoe in lol, deion was Barrrrs. Not bad at all easily lotb do far & a consistent verse with no real misses.

Vs

Smog - opener lol, fl was cool just worded odd, pat stay, reusing, lmao. Wording was honestly your only issue here. Doesnt come off as clean as it should.


Dopw match but letter was cleaner an missed less also had lotb.