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    Super Grand Heru SELF ACTIVATE's Avatar
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    How to capture a thought

    What else is there to say when it's all been said?





    Watch.

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    Re: How to capture a thought

    Hmm... I've been liking shorter pieces lately over ones that go on needlessly for what seems like endless sagas. This, however, might be too short lol.

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    Re: How to capture a thought

    Lol...it was just a thought

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    Re: How to capture a thought

    Quote Originally Posted by SELF ACTIVATE View Post
    Lol...it was just a thought
    And you captured it.

    Nice thought. It's quite meaningful.

    What else is there to say when it's all been said?


    Watch.
    When all has been said and there are no words left to say, 'watching' allows you hear the rest of those unspoken words.
    The ones they think but don't say. We can see thoughts drift across peoples faces and some of us can read those thoughts.
    We use body language, facial expressions, and intuition, call it gut instinct or whatever. But observing is a wonderful thing.
    After we feast our eyes, watching like a hawk, we contemplate the situation, and come out with insight.
    Where there were no words, we know have more understanding.
    I liked this. I didn't think I'd feed it, but I think its deep. And worth mentioning that I appreciated this little thought here.
    Sometimes it's the little things, that turn out to be the big things.

    Nice one Self.
    Nice lil gem.


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    Re: How to capture a thought

    I'm with Kareoshi on the "too short" thing... but despite that I can still pull enough meaning from this to enjoy it. Sometimes people need to sit back and watch and remember that it's OK to have a moment of silent deliberation here and there.

    P.s. - Congratulations on the first piece in PC history where every feedback post is longer than the actual piece.

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