Picture with Cavities

[143]

I felt the rush through the caramel walls
Biting at the intuitive nature picturing me looking through rose colored spy glasses
Positioning itself frame-less
Telling of a wordless story

But in the interim, the collapsing sweetness is mildly hypnotic
French kissing pathways to a shaded stoop for conversation
Intellect selling wares of cares to prolong the constitution of revolution
Fighting back urges in picturesque skinny jeans

Dibia$e is playing beats per minute dancing under spell
Swelling ankles in breaking moves fracturing airstreams in gracefulness
Plagiarizing carnations moving in winded weather
She calls to exhume demons that plague her previous 12 hours

Sweat build condos turning up stereos announcing her vibrancy
Declaring that I should join in the campaign
Pledging allegiance to a fledgling idea of togetherness
Banded pair of sneakers tied at the hip......

I strap up for the unknown
Journeying to a maze of ending turns
Birthing a child of questioning
Poised in a frame-less picture with cavities....

[Emily]

I felt the rush through the caramel walls
Biting at the intuitive nature picturing me looking through rose colored spy glasses
Positioning itself frame-less
Telling of a wordless story

Nice intro 143.
The way you use elegant wording to paint a rich picture fills me with
regal tone. I mean, caramel walls is really nice. And wording like 'biting the intuitive nature'
is something fresh for me to read. Also, the rose coloured glasses are nothing new but by putting
the word spy there, you've changed something ordinary and made it extra ordinary.
And that's what I'm used to with your unique ways.
Also, 'telling of a wordless story' is great.
Nice unique linking of words.
I think what I appreciate in this piece 143 is your ability to draw a diagram for us, but in that picture
you use those elegant words I'm talking about and then throw in pop-culture and that mix is enticing
for me to read. That mix is interesting... 'french kissing pathways' and the like, just great.
There's a lot of wonderful lines in this.
I won't go ahead and quote them all, being that I've gotta get
the rest of the feed finished.

143, nice stuff.


Thank you.