week 11: Clout Vs Rattlesnake [Clout wins]

[Spree]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



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- Pic Battle Option -
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@Clout @Rattlesnake

[Wuxia]

Check. Going 10.

[Clout]

What is up

[Wuxia]

ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately
here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
irl ur nerdy af bro..
..don't attempt to toss shade or slay the don
u ain't a deceptive goon armed with a cannon, u just cosplayed as megatron
ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere

[Clout]

Hey its the guy who "didn't" bite my captain America shield line ;-) from his 1-2 match

HI broke lesnar, rattlesnake, onslaught or onslot w/e the fuck.

So wait yall...surplus gets called for biting

& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
ironic how 3 of ur aliases define u best. U live up to em' by way of Action, les.
Cus ur broke & being a snake fills the slot for all the lowlife shit that hasn't happened yet
Ducked Ronin w/ the hands durin playoffs. How's it G shit? cut the chatter dog.
When it took one kick from Overeem to expose lesnar's far from being a hardbody after all.
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.


Goodluck, thanks.
@Killing Spree this one haha

[Spree]

ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
this was cool...but the wordplay and punch doesnt really work. needs to be worded better. the wordplays dope but this missed for me
ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately
lol. this was weird but cool
here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
this is a miss for me. punch is basic and sur was banned for biting word for word. no flip.
irl ur nerdy af bro..
..don't attempt to toss shade or slay the don
u ain't a deceptive goon armed with a cannon, u just cosplayed as megatron
this was cool
ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere
dope.

vs


& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
dope
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
nice
ironic how 3 of ur aliases define u best. U live up to em' by way of Action, les.
Cus ur broke & being a snake fills the slot for all the lowlife shit that hasn't happened yet
this was dope. all name plays.
Ducked Ronin w/ the hands durin playoffs. How's it G shit? cut the chatter dog.
When it took one kick from Overeem to expose lesnar's far from being a hardbody after all.
not feeling this. could have been dope but i dont see the tie with ronnin
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.
this was cool. i fucks with it

overall- i got clout taking this easily. felt broke rushed his verse i wasnt a fan of much he brought this week. Clout had some dope name plays and personals with only one miss.

V/Clout

[Stat.]

Rattlesnake
ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years

vs.

Clout
& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.

Aight battle. Rattlesnake, I liked the concepts you came up with and your wordplay but I noticed you like to simplify by spelling words shorter and using common acronyms, which I can't hate on... but wtf is irl? Clout, the part I liked most about your verse was the way you combined your wordplay concepts with personals. It felt like you simply had more ammo against Rattlesnake. Only constructive feedback I would give to you is to tell you that your verse feels very 1-2 ish. Like each bar could be rearranged in any order. I think your verse could be more effective when one bar flows seamlessly into the next. Overall I think Clout won

Vote Clout

[Amen]

here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
Could have flipped this - so it was more effective, but decent none the less... Just a little on the basic side of test battle rapping.
ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere
Another basic one but cool straight forward PUN.

vs

& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.
A little wordy but the bars above were all good and solid.

Clout got it.

[Slowhands]

Rattlesnake

ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
meh
ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately
ok
here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
meh
irl ur nerdy af bro..
..don't attempt to toss shade or slay the don
u ain't a deceptive goon armed with a cannon, u just cosplayed as megatron
ok
ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere
meh

had a couple ok concepts, some humor, but didnt seem to incorp everything together and was inconsistent



Clout

& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
personal, good for opener
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
meh
ironic how 3 of ur aliases define u best. U live up to em' by way of Action, les.
Cus ur broke & being a snake fills the slot for all the lowlife shit that hasn't happened yet
ok
Ducked Ronin w/ the hands durin playoffs. How's it G shit? cut the chatter dog.
When it took one kick from Overeem to expose lesnar's far from being a hardbody after all.
nice
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.
meh

seemed like you had more personals and context, first half of your verse was the best and to me enough to win easy.


overall, clout had more consistent punches and more context to his verse to be effective. easy vote - clout

[KnowP]

ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
lmao fire
ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately
dope
here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
weak land imo
irl ur nerdy af bro..
..don't attempt to toss shade or slay the don
u ain't a deceptive goon armed with a cannon, u just cosplayed as megatron
coo concept but weak land
ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere
lol nice closer




vs




& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
sick personal
Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
aight. not hard but good hit
ironic how 3 of ur aliases define u best. U live up to em' by way of Action, les.
Cus ur broke & being a snake fills the slot for all the lowlife shit that hasn't happened yet
ehhh coulda been harder. good concept tho
Ducked Ronin w/ the hands durin playoffs. How's it G shit? cut the chatter dog.
When it took one kick from Overeem to expose lesnar's far from being a hardbody after all.
little stretched wording but good flip
ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.
points for nerdy bars but punchline was weak to. too indirect.



had to break it down bar for bar cause both had a dope verse. but I gotta give it to the one with the harder hits overall. good shit from both.

v. Rat

[Smog]

Rattle

That opener was slick from start to finish..
Rouge was cool
I thought droppin nice was ok
Deceptive goon was pretty good man
I fuck with that closer too

Vs
Clout

Opener was solid
Tight lipped was lol
That name joint was solid
Overeem was solid too
Closer was ur weakest

Tuff bout.. Both consistent both pretty much landed all so I gotta go with who had the harsher material n I feel clout edged it 4-3 on that.. This actually a real close match good personals n creativity so proud to both but I got clout barely taking this.. Good shit yall

Clout

[JEM.]

Rattlesnake

ur girl said u awful with $..
..if the vag wet i'm bout to sample her wares
so let me bust after i slip intuit quicken, u can use that for ur financial affairs
Haha, dope. I read some of the “poorly worded” and sometimes I wonder how people read things. This was perfectly worded.

sorry, I just have to do this:

“Your girl said you awful with money… if the vag wet i’m bout to sample her wares
So let me bust after I slip into it quick and you can use that for your financial affairs”

^ That bar is perfectly worded. Great word play.


ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately
Lol, a bit out there, but okay.


here's the latest news, ur fams a bunch of queers
sur got banned over "dropping nice" flips, something u haven't done in years
Lol, dope. Literal, straight to the point, and sur bit the “dropping nice” line.


irl ur nerdy af bro..
..don't attempt to toss shade or slay the don
u ain't a deceptive goon armed with a cannon, u just cosplayed as megatron
I got the bar, but eh. okay at best.


ur 17-2 w/o a medal? this bad of a flop is so rare
cuz yeah u managed to fulsome voters, but all of their flattery got u nowhere
Lol, good.

Clout


Hey its the guy who "didn't" bite my captain America shield line ;-) from his 1-2 match

HI broke lesnar, rattlesnake, onslaught or onslot w/e the fuck.

So wait yall...surplus gets called for biting

& RS won't weigh in. He moves as a snake, silent on some winter soldier shit.
ur Shield line in 1-2? many agreed it Carried some clout along w/ ur teeth marks all over it
Haha, dope.


Let the Convent to his squad of fairies. Name swap all u want, ur façade is weary.
After all that? he's more tightlipped than a nun's pussy whose stuck living in a monastery
Pretty good.


ironic how 3 of ur aliases define u best. U live up to em' by way of Action, les.
Cus ur broke & being a snake fills the slot for all the lowlife shit that hasn't happened yet
Good bar.

Ducked Ronin w/ the hands durin playoffs. How's it G shit? cut the chatter dog.
When it took one kick from Overeem to expose lesnar's far from being a hardbody after all.
Eh, okay.


ur bitch moves ensure all of ur credentials Argon, U wish u could revert back
U wont square up cus u can't mix well w/others like the chemical property of that Inert Gas.
Pretty good.


This was a really good battle. Both really brought it and personally, Rattle had the LOTB with the quicken line… this was a tough call, because Clout’s opener was ALMOST just as good… but I just think Rattle took it. The surplus line was “dropping nice” was a good hit. I went back and forth several times on who to vote for… but Rattle, by the smallest margin.

v/Rattle

[A. Diction]

ur a typical pedo, u own plush toys n a destiny tee
u hate going rogue cuz u'd have to wear gloves to touch boys affectionately

That was fire.

Broke won


This league has gone to shit

[Spree]

5-2 clout wins