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Thread: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [Letterman wins]

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    WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [Letterman wins]

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    Last edited by Letterman; August 7th, 2016 at 03:44 AM

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Letterman/Macavelli


    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    Nowadays an Ezekiel be enough to stake a kosher death
    Left ghost instead, these Dudes don't even know their dead

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    decent opener
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    nah not feeling
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    fresh nameflip on us.. I liked it but I'm biased lol good looks on the shout out
    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    creative concept and well worded but not much of an actual punch imo
    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    nah you knew this wasn't good when you wrote it lol
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    good. that set up was dope btw with the ferris wheel wordplay, damn near could have used that concept for the punch instead.
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    didn't like it
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    this shit is straight fire
    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    weak closer


    vs.


    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    creative, decent. blood and good don't rhyme to anyone who's american though
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    nah too simple and obvious
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    nah
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    weak, don't nameplay yourself.
    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    wasn't feeling the execution of this. same as blood and good btw, this doesn't rhyme to me.
    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    nope didn't like it
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    okay decent
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    not feeling this
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    creative attempt conceptually but there's really no punch here. weak closer.


    Alright fellas, I'm just gonna be real here.. for a champ match this shit felt pretty weak to me. I'm not familiar with either of you guys so I don't know if it was just an off week or whatever, but I had been looking forward to seeing what yall were gonna bring and this disappointed. Don't get me wrong, I see the potential in the concepts there but the wording and execution was missing on a lot of it. Letterman has better wording and is more polished which goes a long way because he makes a not so special concept come across as a pretty decent punch by wording it well. LOTB was easily the meteorite wordplay, and overall I just felt like Letterman's best shit was better than En's best shit and his worst shit wasn't quite as bad as En's worst shit. Letterman's verse just read smoother to me and hit harder. En you gotta fix those rhyme patterns man, good and blood doesn't rhyme to most of us and that hurts you. But even besides that you just didn't really bring anything harsh or impactful. Lots of creativity and conceptually interesting stuff, but it didn't really connect as an actual diss or punch to your opponent so I gotta give Letterman the edge in this one. You should have been able to beat his verse, though.


    v/ Letterman
    Last edited by Lay Doubt.; August 7th, 2016 at 05:57 AM
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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Let

    Opener is forced to me
    Heir on his back was light
    Didn't really like doubt spits just sounded awkward to me
    Extensions was oooooook reference was a lik different but still light
    Fans r Falling was iight
    I've ne re seen horsin around/ carousel befo do this was cool
    Sign of danger was ok
    I've seen meteorite man I was really feeling this one
    Close was ehh

    Vs

    Bombz

    Opener was ehh, dated concept, decent tie ins, overall ok
    Stranger things was true, lol, ooook tho
    Weight than arms was cool
    Post traumatic was nice imo
    iMac was ehh, the rhyme was off to me
    Fly off the bridge was oooook
    Spinning off combos was cool
    Writers guild I fuck wit this one
    Closer was light

    Iight decent battle man I expected more it just felt like lets getting burnt out, lotta his execution felt lazy resulting in light hits n misses.. Ur heaviest was the carousel joint.. Bombz seemed a bit fresher here n picked up towards the end landing a few nice punches.. A little more personal at the start helped balance this verse better although u had a couple ehh barz u stayed more consistent n land mute heavy shots than let here.. Cool read yall but I got

    Bombz

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    >> nice start 0.50

    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    >> wasnt feelin this bro 0.0

    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    >> decent 0.25

    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    >> nah, i feel like the extension/tracks/hair bars are played 0.25

    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    >> lol light 0.25

    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    >> some ppl may say this is played but i like the wordplay/scheme here...dope 0.75

    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    >> okay 0.25

    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    >> dope 0.75

    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    >> weak close bro 0.25

    Total: 3.25
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    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    >> weak start 0.25

    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    >> wasnt feelin this one bro.. 0.25

    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    >> lmfao 0.50

    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    >> nice personal w/ the punch here.. 0.50

    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    >> meh 0.25

    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    >> nah 0.0

    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    >> lol cool 0.50

    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    >> some dark shit here, dope 0.50

    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    >> the close was not strong here bro 0.25

    Total: 3.0

    My vote: letter (this was a very close battle, very debatable - def good shit yall, respect to the both of u... but i got LET edging it slightly)

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    I'm not a fan of comparison punches (i.e. blah blah "like" blah blah)
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    another comparison punch, this was better than the opener but still not feeling it
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    this was good
    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    another comparison punch
    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    no
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    aaaand another comparison
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    this is ok
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    weak execution, ruined the concept
    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    nope

    vs

    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    not bad
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    doesn't really hit
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    lol ok
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    decent, could have been done better
    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    battle bud and apple goods doesn't even rhyme bro
    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    don't care for comparison punches..
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    not hard, should have been worded better, but ok
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    meh
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    not feeling this

    I was expecting much more from this battle. Came in thinking it'd be a good read and was very disappointed. Even Bombz didn't come close to his other stuff I've read, but Letterman was straight FL quality, in a champ match no less. I'll just chalk this up to a rough week for both, but Enbombz took this pretty easily because Letterman didn't really have anything. I'm sure you'll both do better next week

    v/Enbombz

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid

    vs

    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood

    Champ match here, seen much much better from both but this one was a nice demonstration of skills. can't choose a lotb here since the the most outstanding and hard hitting bars are all close, i'd say meteorite bar, however its clear that letterman got the W in this one, could go either way though. Expected more fire for a champ match but fuk it this was decent yo

    letterman

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    - liked this
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    - ok hit
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    - ok but force type vibe
    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    - meh not great
    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    - ok ish
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    - like this
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    - subtle, simple, ok hit
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    - ok hit
    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    - meh for closer

    Overall not bad verse, i liked the simple/subtle punches you had, first 2 and carosel one. Something made them appealing and enjoyed them. Started good and consistency was ok minus a few bars. Not bad


    vs.


    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    - liked this, somehow the set up appealed and made punch decent
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    - lol ok hit but statement vibe
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    - lol creative
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    - meh, got the post/ptsd play but still felt meh
    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    - ok, had to pull out the accent to rhyme, so credit there
    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    - meh not feeling
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    - ok hit
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    - ok
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    - i dunno, funny but seemed generic

    Overall you had a decent verse, had a good mix of humor that i like and some subtle plays that i find appealling too. Not bad at all


    Both had decent verses but I think bombz had lines i find more appealing. Its close to call but i think both had effective hits, but felt Lets misses were more defined that bombz. Gotta to vote Enbombz, good read to both

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel

    vs

    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar


    One def let me down, he had some good ideas but a generic wording that took away from the punch power the other def surprised me had some good angles and solid lines... v/ Enbombz
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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz -[EXT Due Tonight!]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    ^dope
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    ^solid
    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    ^ehh
    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    ^lmao
    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    ^coulda been worded/executed better
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    ^cool
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    ^seen cross bones concept before but the sign of danger set up was cool
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    ^fire
    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    ^miss. This aint no fashion critique, its a battle amongst men


    Vs


    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    ^decent. i see the tie ins
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    ^nah
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    ^lmao
    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    ^so-so
    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    ^ok
    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    ^landed
    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    ^cool
    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    ^eh
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    ^ok





    Got letter in an entertaining battle

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Vote: Enbombz

    Letterman is out of it, and it shows in the bars. Weaker than usual, probably one of his worse shows in a while. Couple bars that hit, but the rest is underwhelming. En wasn't all that but much more consistent, with at least 3 quotes. In general En has fresher concepts and ideas than Letterman.
    Seems like this is simply a tired champ and a hungry, improving upcomer. Upcomer got it this time arond

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    @Enbombz up in votes 5-4. Need more votes, MUST WIN by 2 votes.

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Letter:

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    lol, nice.

    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    Nice.

    You got the swagger of a legend, but it's phony. Youll never put em in hearses
    We see your style & think "Doubt, Spit's".. only cuz we dont believe shit u put in ur verses
    Eh, okay. I get the name flips/personal… but it was just alright to me.

    Im always busy so I key last minute. Dont even care cuz you're light
    So extensions are the reason this bitch is getting beat.. like black girls pulling hair in a fight
    Not feeling.

    We used to like your raps. Now they're soft and none hurt
    The bars are the reason your are fans falling - Snoop and Wiz concert
    Not feeling.

    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    dope.

    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    eh.

    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid
    Nice.

    You rock the worst clothes. All your gear should meet a burner
    & u should fire ur designer, cuz he has as much style as the dude that sings Timmy Turner
    Eh.


    Bombz:

    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    Nice, pretty good start.

    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80’s
    Not bad… luckily a co-worker told me about the show recently.

    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    lol.

    Scraped through last week, i'll re open the wounds when we battle today
    Barely Survived War..so this post traumatic as Bombs shells rattle ya brain
    Not feeling.

    Don't blink cos its gonna be a quick exchange when we battle bud
    Just 1 shot to ya iMac n i'm walking away with the rest of ya Apple goods
    Eh, not feeling.

    These Punch's ll leave him in a bad way when i fold this fake
    We'll see those frames fly off the bridge like a bad day on the golden gate
    Not feeling.

    Let gonna school me? nah ya think ya better than ya truly are
    Fruit you'll get left spinning off more combinations than a smoothie bar
    lol, nice.

    Ya crew just big fish in a small pond, ya'll ain't going blow for blow bud
    Bitch I'll slash through ya writers guild, leave you drowning in ya own blood
    Not feeling.

    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room
    Not feeling.

    Um, I have let winning this. It wasn’t his best effort, but as a reader,
    I gravitate towards word play/clever/witty… if Bombz would’ve given me
    bars like the first one, all drop… I would’ve been in… It was close though,
    and I imagine could go either way, just personal preference.

    Let just took it with a bit more wordplay and cleverness. I was expecting
    a bit more, especially from En… which usually drops a lot of witty,
    sharp bars… but it wasn’t to be…

    v/ Let - very close

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    Re: WK14 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman vs Enbombz [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Im a real shooter. If it's war then you know ya dead
    I'll give this foo tons of shots that'll pull his insides out like a sofa bed
    Invite u on a fishing trip. Drown u then ya son's walkin da plank
    So he'll be underwater with the heir on his back like an oxygen tank
    You talk beef in England but in my streets you wont fair as well
    I swear it's no horsin' around, you'll see the metal spin the kid like a carousel
    When I pull out the piece shit's real cuz im a boss, holmes
    It's a sign of danger, so either leave or bullets'll hit your skull n cross bones
    Talk tough and ill come up beside you and throw the hands like Floyd
    So if you see meteorite, know you're about to get rocked harder than an asteroid




    vs



    Ya top spot gonna be a short stay, ending w/ lead rounds n blood
    Each chamber maid with your name on it, until you check out for good
    You gone come with the same generics, think any different ya crazy
    I mean I've seen Stranger Things but it involves a bunch of kids in the 80's
    I mean..Last week had some shocks, my man Knowp surprised a vet,
    We saw Knows carry more weight than Arms, that's just everyday life for Let
    Those glasses scream victim, there's no Debating that ya fates doomed
    If eyes are the window to our soul, yours got triple glazing n a safe room



    damn bruh. no wonder this shit is still up. its mad close in quotables but I feel one had more harder bars that directly attacked his oppenet. mad close is has gon e both ways. but I gotta chose the one with better overall bars.


    v. let

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