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    Irregular Heartbeat

    Irregular Heartbeat
    https://www.bing.com/search?q=irregu...UnUufuQbSQHgFo

    I wrote you back myself, don’t forget my closet had a closet
    White as fuck and I didn’t mean to cause it
    I can bite, but my bark is better
    Lead you to the sun motherfucker if he let her
    “Don’t make me ride on them for real”
    Cause I can still hold a steel (with my legs)
    It’s what’s up… but how do you feel?
    Me? Like Im climbing without the pegs
    My entire design is spirits, but don’t try to tie to my soul
    Spirits home cause all I think is did this bitch sell not to be sould
    Who a coward now, I still got heart
    But I shake when pulled or even when my car doesn’t start

    Legally I can’t back shit up right now, I might have 6 months over my head
    But I will pull a shot on Instagram and I’m to the point IDC if hes dead
    You better think twice bitch before you pee on whose bed
    Cause second authority too we all tagged by the feds
    Jail isn’t a pleasant place, but criminal mental was worse
    Go ahead and plea insanity cause no one will be charged if you end up in a hurse
    Which is worse? The gift or the curse?

    … Yeah we “took some out the baggies and put it in our purse”
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    Re: Irregular Heartbeat

    Credibility... why you think nobody like or answer
    I’m fitten to cut you out like Lobos did to cancer
    I hate when I go on cause when you flow they fight
    Tupac and biggie... there’s too many to name this past year or ever since
    But still I’m not too scared to write “until her shit started to make sense”

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    I used to hate Jay for some reason (prolly nas) but I respect him now
    It’s all starting to make sense a little bit but still nobody will tell me how

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    Whose scared and shaking now pussy - get off me
    Because if 10 rounds go off again my dead gpa might’ve been a Nazi
    It still haunts me...
    But God over everything and I’m still learning the ropes
    Don’t forget who wrote the rules to that game if ones dream is left to hopes
    I can’t call it... she said not to judge but I assume it’s ok to charge
    I’m not trying to be a gangster... I’m just trying to live large
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    Re: Irregular Heartbeat

    @A Disciple
    I'm in awe at how much you write. I think you have amazing talent thats not fully recognised on this site.
    I've told you before you seem to have an endless supply of great lines, lines that flow well, lines that rhyme well,
    pictures that are painted well, stories that seem real to a reader like me.
    What chucks a spanner in the works for me is some lines that I just don't understand, they go over my head, they get mixed up somewhere but then I find myself straightened out again and on a nice stream of consciousness.
    The majority of your work I can easily imagine in lyric form with music backing it.
    Keep at it, you're a natural.

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    Re: Irregular Heartbeat

    Thanks @Emily
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