User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 13 of 13

Thread: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - ZUNTO WINS

  1. #1
    El Unico Zunto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Posts
    2,622
    Battle Record
    5-0

    Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - ZUNTO WINS

    LLL Season 24




    https://i.ibb.co/9TVqDMM/lll24penthusiast.png






    Rules[/center]

    Due Dates:

    Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
    Battles that lack votes may close later.
    One sided battles may get closed early.
    Extensions are 24 hours



    Line Limit:

    Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
    If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


    Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

    FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!



    @Mac.
    Last edited by Wuxia; December 6th, 2021 at 12:16 PM

  2. #2
    +1 Mac's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2011
    Location
    Somewhere in Latin America
    Posts
    1,559
    Battle Record
    14-41
    Awards 1-2 Punch HW Champion - Award Request Accepted SOTW

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0)

    check, 10

  3. #3
    El Unico Zunto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Posts
    2,622
    Battle Record
    5-0

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0)

    Sounds good

  4. #4
    El Unico Zunto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Posts
    2,622
    Battle Record
    5-0

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Mac. View Post
    día is sick, friends with baron, two pedo kings
    monsters & missing kids? you know that’s a stranger’s thing
    Quote Originally Posted by Mac. View Post
    got the crowd doin waves, surfing him to the first EMS on sight
    call me Travis; plethora folk's dying in a rap show tonite

    You call those good? Listen I’ll…


    Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
    But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
    Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
    This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
    Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
    So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
    n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
    catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
    This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
    Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack

  5. #5
    +1 Mac's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2011
    Location
    Somewhere in Latin America
    Posts
    1,559
    Battle Record
    14-41
    Awards 1-2 Punch HW Champion - Award Request Accepted SOTW

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0)

    i know a few things about you.. Mr. Mod

    Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
    you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
    here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
    how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
    tell me!
    & talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
    words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
    listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
    pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
    we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
    now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
    Last edited by Mac; December 9th, 2021 at 07:28 PM

  6. #6
    ... Chrit.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2000
    Location
    904
    Age
    40
    Posts
    36,635
    Battle Record
    41-13
    Awards Cypher Winner - Award Request Accepted LLL HOF OM HOF SS HW Champion LLL Champion 1-2 Season Champion 1-2 Punch HW Champion FL Champion 100+ Wins ABL Champion

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
    But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
    Kind of simple... but worded decently
    Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
    This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
    Cool
    Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
    So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
    Eh... not a fan of the concept... but again worded decently
    n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
    catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
    Nah
    This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
    Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
    Why black people? Just added extra words lol. Cool idea though

    vs

    Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
    you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
    Super choppy... super simple
    here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
    how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
    No
    tell me!
    & talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
    words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
    Nope
    listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
    pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
    Also no
    we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
    now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
    Also no... wording was bad throughout and just nothing that really connected

    v/Zunto and it wasn't close
    AI

  7. #7
    It's just like that Justice Grimm's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    St. Paul
    Posts
    463
    Battle Record
    10-5

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Zunto View Post
    You call those good? Listen I’ll…


    Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
    But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
    ok
    Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
    This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
    solid
    Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
    So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
    Not feeling this one... cool but doesn't connect hard
    n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
    catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
    not feeling this one either
    This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
    Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
    Nah
    vs

    Quote Originally Posted by Mac. View Post
    i know a few things about you.. Mr. Mod

    Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
    you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
    wording is off, feel like this could've been way cleaner
    here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
    how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
    nah
    tell me!
    & talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
    words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
    this one could've been sick. cool concept, bad wording and set up
    listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
    pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
    no
    we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
    now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
    no
    I got zunto here, better all around. I feel like Mac could've come hard with the CV and cliffhanger lines but they both suffered on the delivery, Zunto came cleaner and more consistent.

    V/Zunto

  8. #8
    I'll have the gabagool Fresh's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    Canada
    Posts
    20,410
    Battle Record
    96-70
    Awards FL Tournament Winner - Award nomination from Spree accepted. 75+ Wins 1-2 Punch HW Champion LLL Champion Cypher Winner OM HOF FL Champion

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
    But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
    i like this
    Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
    This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
    dope
    Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
    So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
    lmao this is great
    n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
    catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
    didnt like this one
    This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
    Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
    nahh

    vs

    Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
    you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
    statementish
    here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
    how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
    eh
    tell me!
    & talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
    words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
    like the concept but wording hurts you here
    listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
    pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
    nahh
    we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
    now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
    dont get it but if i did i wouldnt like it

    mac has to work on his wording he had a couple cool concepts

    zunto had his first 3 bars and the italian bar had me dying laughing cause i had an italian boss who did it n the shits hilarious lmaoo

    v/zunto

  9. #9
    You'll get the point... Phalanx's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2013
    Posts
    1,309
    Battle Record
    19-1
    Awards 1-2 Season Champion - Award Request Accepted LLL Champion - Award Request Accepted 1-2 Punch HW Champion - Award Request Accepted Cypher Winner FL Champion

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Zunto, town drunk was solid w/ the personal tie in. Easy mac was dopely executed. The rest was kind of light, but you kept the jabs coming.

    Mac, you had alot of potential dope concepts, but your wording hurts you. Barrel off your mouth? The concept has a personal tie in & all, but you botched the delivery. Midseason was a solid jab. But the rest fell flat for me.

    I got Zunto taking this.

  10. #10
    tha pendragon mal diction's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2014
    Location
    Tha Salf East
    Posts
    1,155
    Battle Record
    3-17

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
    But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
    str8 2 bars
    Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
    This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
    str8 diss ... could have been better though
    Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
    So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
    i guess...if you said like gays talking it would have made more sense.. not strong just more sense
    n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
    catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
    gun play lines ..blah
    This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
    Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
    good w/p .. and closer




    Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
    you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
    str8 diss
    here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
    how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
    could have worded this better ... good set up.. just fell short on the punch
    tell me!
    & talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
    words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
    could have worded it better
    listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
    pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
    no.. doesnt even rhyme
    we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
    now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
    i dont get this...

    Zunto is winning this by a large margin .. mac just fell short work on your wording lil dude
    aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing

  11. #11
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    Boston, MA.
    Posts
    14,346
    Battle Record
    128-135
    Awards 1-2 Punch HW Champion 100+ Wins FL Champion VBL Champion

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Sorry guys break down from phone.

    I felt Zunto connected most of his bars except the Slasher one wasn’t really feeling the wording. The hands in your face Italian line was dope. Opener was pretty decent. Closer was also dope.

    Mac man wording wasn’t the best here. I was only feeling your opener. Good attempts but you rushed here and fell flat.

    V/Zunto
    [url]https:

  12. #12
    ROMANTICAL Ryno's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2014
    Posts
    4,124
    Battle Record
    12-3
    Awards Cypher Winner Golden Glove Champion GBL Champion LLL Champion FL Tournament Winner FL Tag Champion FL Champion

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Zunto - - - Town drunk was cool. Hash slinging slasher gave me a smirk, haha. Couple ideas that were worded good but we’re pretty light.

    Mac - - - Idk man, not really feeling the way ur getting these ideas across. Hard to pick one that I enjoyed here. ‘The closer’ was maybe the best attempt here

  13. #13
    El Unico Zunto's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Posts
    2,622
    Battle Record
    5-0

    Re: Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Zunto Wins 7-0

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •