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Let’s work on getting these bars posted @daveDILLYOriginally Posted by MV
DUE MONDAY NIGHT
Last edited by miracle; May 3rd, 2024 at 05:31 PM
i rise 2 the occasion when needed - dis fag easily scares..
he either rosary cowers in the corner, beggin 4 mercy saying prayers
Last edited by daveDILLY; May 6th, 2024 at 09:23 PM
when you took back your last bar i knew exactly how to thin the crowd
the only twist with how much you suck whilst pulling your punch, would make Karrine Steffans proud
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sorry MV, i got to go with Dave on this one... cleaner setup and punch... plus MV fed off of Dave
v-dave
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
tough call here.
dave - rosary was kinda cool, kinda forced and the end result didnt really hit that hard. best part about it was the WP and the set up was well connected
mv - didnt know the broads name, had to google it and then understood the reference, thats annoying lmao. The concept is good - the flow was super wordy but you needed all that to land it the way you wanted ... maybe flipping it backwards putting the broads name first and eliminating the word "twist" would have came off smoother and gave you a chance at a more connected, better set up.
tough call like i said, good WP with a meh hit or a good concept with a very muddled delivery and needing to google the fuckin punchline... lmao.
i'll be back for this.
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