13th Disciple (3-1) v. A2Z (2-1) VERSES ARE IN

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[A2Z]

this isn't right....last week i got fgee this week i get 13? ah w/e i do this shit for fun any way...check in...good luck 13

[13th Disciple]

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[13th Disciple]

okay...ain't no point of waiting....here it is......keyed....


a member of disciples commitee...quotin my punches, ridin my dick
but A2Z couldn't come wit hotter writes if he was grillin his Bics
ur played punches ain't connectin like lightning strikin the phone
watch ur tone..ur mouth is growin bigger like swallowing silicone
like a jester at sea...only thing u casting out are played lines
but u must be a obese poet...the way u stay biting my rhymes
intoxicatin ur blood wit poison flowin nuthin but Captain Morgans
I.C.U...losin cuz i'm taking u out like i was donating ur organs
u thinkin u hard but ur soft....like turning crack into coke.....
this battles a joke...cuz A2Z couldnt see this victory if Bob Hoped
under 500 watts in a battle u still couldn't shine on the Mic
computers ur source of reality...made a website to create ur life
hang on my lines like impatient crackheads...as im sendin u hits
u beatin me would be outta the blue...like rehabilitated Crips
16 total lines.....5-0......guaranteed Disciples in favor
this coward prolly won't show his face....like Tim Taylors neighbor

blah.........come one wit the playedness

[A2Z]

OK Before The Battle:

Things To Know
1. His Custom Title Says "Pimps Up Hoes Down"
2. Hes With The Regime
3. His Nickname Is "Coolie"
4. He Is Divorced
5. There Were Only 12 Disciples
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…Even Playing Basketball With The Crippled He Wouldn’t Be The Best-Around…
...Losing? Impossible, Even In His Custom Title He Admits That Hes Going-Down…(1)
…Every Night Disciple Is With Three Fly-Teens…Cuz He Has Tons Of Wet-Dreams…
…When Hes Gay Enough Just When He-Screams “Thirteen’s With The-Regime!”…(2)
…You Couldn’t Drop An Album If You Stood On Your Roof And Tossed A-CD…
…Sorry, No One Can Take You-Seriously When Your Ex-Wife Call You-Coolie…(3)
…The Failed Lover 13th Disciple Has No Skills, You Can Tell Cuz His Wifey Up-And-Split…
…23 Years Old, 21 Posts A Day, He Was Trying To be An E-Gangsta But Instead He Lost-His-Kid ...(4)
…This Kid Had Gottten Caught Naked In The Cold, S0 He Could Say That He Was Sick…
…55? Easy To-Win, When Ya Lines Are Stretched More Then The Ass-Skin Of A Fat-Chick…
…Believe Me, When I Saw Our Names Said In The Same Line, I Though It Was-A-Joke…
…Cuz-13 Could Only Earn ‘Rings’ If I Were To Describe How Hes Gets All-His-‘Votes’…
…This Kid Thought He Could Step With Me, But Woke Up And Cryed Cuz It Was A-Dream…
…Claim To Beat-Me? How? Your Hanging On My Lines More Then Ape Coke-Fiends…
…Dumbass, Ya Think Its Ya Skill That’s Has Everyone Knowing Your-Name?...
…Its All The-Same, Cuz Everytime You Lose You Bitch About It For Three-Days…
…Thinking This An Easy Battle, Like All Your You Others, You Couldn’t Resist…
..So I Expose This-Bitch For What-He-Is…Just Like His Skills He Don’t Exist…

[13th Disciple]

number 1 and 4 are wrong...but good comeback......let the votings
commence.......yadda yadda yadda............................................. ..1

[A2Z]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=Divorced

^^In there u say ur divorced

And im shure i can get someone to vouch for me saying u just changed it...wow...trying to avoid a punch...

tsk tsk 13, and i thought u were a vet...

[A2Z]

And now i found someone to vouch for yours saying that...his name is Zainy: heres to convo:

Menace2Society66: do u remember what 13th disciple's custom title was until ten minutes ago?
Menace2Society66: did it not say Pimpz Up Hoez Down
Ender132wiggen: yea
Menace2Society66: are u shure?
Ender132wiggen: sure

if you dont believe that, just think back a whole ten minutes ago

thats pretty shitty avoiding a punch 13...ah who cares i have you anway

[13th Disciple]

whoa......okay........i changed it way before i even read that battle.
i'm not divorced....if i said i was...whatever....but to make u feel
better since u feel as though u HAVE me.....i'll change it back.....
find someone to vouch for that too.......homo

[Derive]

dammnnn, hot battle, heres the lay-out, it was more one-sided

punches-a2z
style-a2z
wordplay-a2z
flo-13th
vocab-a2z

so overall i think a2z took this, good battle but ima give this one to a2z...

vote-A2Z

[Jet]

^^i dont see him havin u in dis one.....
explanation
the structure of 13's was way better then a2z....

13 had alot better flow~a2z was choppy at sum points but smooth in others....

both had nice word play only problem being that 13's was original an a2z's was way played out.....
example:You Couldn’t Drop An Album If You Stood On Your Roof And Tossed A-CD…

also..u said his lines are streched'like fat chik's....
he's never had stretched lines

as for personals id have to say a2z took the cake~but got carried away in goin into how many posts a day 13 has...theres a limit of how personal u can get till it jus gets 'retarded'~n u crossed that line......

wit punches~it came to me as if a2z was tryna slam them down on the keyboard while 13 jus felt ta cleverly tap his way down to insult him wit jokes n what not....thus i was feelin 13' more wit the punches~as he play'd it cool while a2z probly wanted to hit him every time he hit a key'.......

vote`13th desciple
......dont see why i aim'd me sayin u think u got him~i say 13 took this pretty easy....no hate...

[Baxter D. Wall]

quotables:

13th

hang on my lines like impatient crackheads...as im sendin u hits
u beatin me would be outta the blue...like rehabilitated Crips

^dope.

16 total lines.....5-0......guaranteed Disciples in favor
this coward prolly won't show his face....like Tim Taylors neighbor


^fairly dope as well


A2Z

…Dumbass, Ya Think Its Ya Skill That’s Has Everyone Knowing Your-Name?...
…Its All The-Same, Cuz Everytime You Lose You Bitch About It For Three-Days…

^stretched to hell...but nice personal

ok..i wasnt feeling this at all really.id have to say that i honestly think that A2Z lines were too strecthed. your personals lost all their effect when ttttttttttthhhhhhhhhhheeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyy wwwwwwweeeeeeeeeerrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee tttttttthhhhhhiiiiiiiisssssssss lllllloooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnggggggg. 13ths verse wasnt stretched but had some played parts in it....

like a jester at sea...only thing u casting out are played lines
but u must be a obese poet...the way u stay biting my rhymes

^wack

on the whole i feel that this battle was fairly wack but 13th took it with less wackness.

vote=13

[Derive]

^^wtf, nice crew vote, pretty lame way to get votes, by ur own crew, no beef but just think daz fucked up

[13th Disciple]

i must agree...this battle was wack...i keyed it quick and just like
whatever u know.....but i knew A2Z would come wit played lines
like he does in everybattle so i was like blah.....and purple haze..
get off my dick and please don't try to start the whole crew vote
swaying bullshit....thats almost as played as A2z's lines...but not
that bad yet

[Jet]

Originally posted by Purple Haze
^^wtf, nice crew vote, pretty lame way to get votes, by ur own crew, no beef but just think daz fucked up

end it....dont start a free-postin frenzy in here

lets try an do dis wit class.....