Melancholy

[Squeeze]

Melanchoy
Born of a destructive womb
A beautiful spirit emerged
Made for love caring and gentle kindness
Although destruction was soon to come
Demons surrounded and were quick to devour
The innocence of such a soul
They murdered her psychologically and then left here to her own
The hunger they grew for hate
Brought her to the edge of almost termination
But by then love had finally reached her
Although she may not have been sure at first
And one day her eternal hapiness will come
Then her demons will combust in a defeating flame
And until that day she will lay in a bath made of teary hate
That those demons caused her as they took away her spirit
And left her with nothing but self defeat.

[Cracked]

you are one amazing writer. the person u must have written that for must be kinda crazy. but he/she must love u for sticking with them...

[Squeeze]

you are one amazing writer. the person u must have written that for must be kinda crazy. but he/she must love u for sticking with them...

^^^ You know I wrote it for u...crazy girl.

[Bloom.Quist]

Decent stuff. Actuallly a pretty good one, for one of ure first drops. Good emotion, but that was really all. Elevate in overall vocab and imagery, and anything else. If u like to write poetry as an art then practice, if u like to do it to jsut get ure emotions out,then do that too. Either way ure a good writer so keep doin ya thing.

-holla if ya hear me