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Thread: typicall hoe...(fuk em all)

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    Angry typicall hoe...(fuk em all)

    this is a realistik scripture bitch stand strong you no why your man just hit ya
    make him look like hes sick ha: when you the riding others dicks ha
    you tryed to blame it on the lika ;what you think your man is thick ha
    you should be walking round with a sticka that read
    im a hoe i meet a guy and ill do what ever he sez
    but your ass got caught you should a burnt that reciept for the room that you brought
    for one night and you still dont relise you the reason for this fight
    but let me get this right you pleading "please can we still be tight"
    what are you fukin stupid? This relation ship couildnt even be saved by cupid
    bitch you say you gone call the cop: yeah thats right you fucked the one that control our block
    you ass is running round the clock gettin laid while your man at work gettin paid
    and you complained that you at home and have to slave in the kitchen
    you aint workin a 9 to 5 so stop fukin bitchen
    fuk this meth has got me twichen and ichen
    its like im needing more "stop talking you just a greedy hore"
    your styles outdated and starting to bore
    i cant understand why im keeping you for
    your ass i no longer adore you no what get out here ill show you the fukin door
    i got no need for you any more unless you gonna clean the dirt off my floor
    i gave you a roof over your head if it wasnt for be me you would be raped and dead
    or a prostiuting life is what you would a lead
    and a simple thank you is what you never said
    or even a bit a gratitude but i come home from work to listen to your negative attude
    you got no ambitions in life i aint dissen your life but im wishing you might
    get some direction instead of being on an endlis scandolous money collection
    you ask were the sex has gone from our relasionship
    face it bitch ; with the amount a guys she pleases
    only the lord nos what sorta diseases she got
    oh hold on i for got you used protection;; what about the times you sucked cock to help in the erection
    if im wrong give me some correction....haha i didnt think i would hear a word from your mouth
    so im telling you this ..the money i make is my wealth.... i aint fukin you cause im protecting my health
    so this is the end no use in tryna pretend and defend your self...

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    feed bak plz

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    yo what do i gotta do to get sum feed bak round here yoll............damn even if u hated it tell me and tell me y yo...........this place gone wack on a brother yoll

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    Didnt really like the "Ha" just didnt fit very well...I know where you were coming from with it but i just didnt like that..and try to shorten down your lines a bit so it doesnt look sloppy and stuff you know what i mean man...make'em kinda even and stuff...you know...but yeah we all go through girl problems at some point...sometimes more than we should have too .

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    You lost credibility when u put ha in there. THats juveniles style.

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    yeah brotha u can't taike the niggas "ha"..

    just like u wouldn't take Hova's "Yep"...

    or Otis Redding's "Listen"...(i may have went too far back for you)

    it was almost great...u just need to tune up a few things which i won't list becuz i don't have time ya digg

    but u almost had it....and damn TYPICAL HO....lol

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    thanx 4 yo feed bak.................all feed bak is apreciated...

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