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30 LINE MAX
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..
MAKE THIS HOT!!
METHEUS EMAILED ME HIS VERSE ,SO HERE IT IS QUICK LIKE.
METHEUS
Your style guy?Nothing,fronting,when im around ya don’t test the god man,
this kids known to grip chrome and put a pound to ya chest like tarzan,
I'm a vibrant rapper, my style based on point call it knives and daggers,
The final answer,fuck ya small verse, ask ya girl it's METH that matters,
Amateur clone kids, are like birthday candles, stand to get blown quick,
paired with a knife I slice ur face in angles like a square,
& watch ur eyes & nose dangle from the top of ur stares,
I know blondes are stupid, so Dariel is dumb as bleach,
smartest thing to come out of his mouth are wisdom teeth,
Your nose broken,close wounds, watch the blows open,
& keep ya alive long enough to re-enact ya death in slow motion,
Facin bigger men, Dariel is no comp, he's feminine,
Been eating these sissy sweet asses,but now you're at the bitter end,
Dariel, got outshined with wordplay, get blasted wit flare,
Meth must eat adultery cuz here i'm haveing an affair,
dare his ass to write.. you and rap is just strange,
me winnin's the norm,like payphones don't expect change,
you already got beat, But lets finish this shit on a crazy end
note,
you'll never have my number, But i'll still pin you, Like an atm code,
Dead froze, thought you'd win, Sorry Dariel,ya plan's flew to hell,
I'm extendin my index finger and thumb, Let me hand you the L,
ya got more surprised looked in ya face then RB Smiles, when i dropped this like Super model panties infront of nerds/
can't believe ya posted that verse, well its behind me, cause you be gettin shit 'back-words'/
Metheus, i beat ya down 'son' like 'demestic violence', so biatch, ya can call me 'father'/
i spit 'harder' than a Playboy Bunny on Hue Hefner dosin viagra, and when i 'spit', i still 'cum farther'/
act like you supposed to be here while you 'hangin out', if thats so, find a tree and i'ma get tha 'rope'/
this kid take the win, like gettin away with racial slurs, when he trying call them 'colorful anicdotes'/
i'm just going to be straight, son, you couldn't use 'word-play', if you was playin scrabble/
talk this, talk that, guess this nigga about a lot of babble, you be gettin' off 'point', i'ma help you by 'stabbin you'/
the 'punchs' i am throwin are so dirty, its like i'm 'biting ears', Meth thought 'Mic-Tyson' was fighting/
Meth couldnt beat me battlin the dead, if you had someone 'ghost writting'/
this geek be given me id software first person shooter games, cause he wants me to meet my 'doom'/
ya wasn't even 'off the hook', when the doctor cut your embiblical cord in the delivery room/
simply said, handless judges ain't the only reason why Metheus ain't gettin a 'thumbs up' for a vote/
ya couldn't spit a 'fresh' rhyme, even if before you spit on the mic, you was swishin round Scope/
i'm passin Meth Demerall, so when 'Meth ODs', maybe then he can add in the 'Man'/ (MethOD Man)
Meth dont deserve any masculine names, cause he nothin but a bitch, so i'm givin him back hands/
i got ya caught in my 'rap' while i'm masked, so its like you never knew who did it like Peter Parker/
i got ya 'drowning under pressure' in this battle like i had you bench-pressin under water/
ya 'cumin' on the mic to battle me like you needed artificial limps for masterbating, cause ya be weak at gripping/
ya like blind rappers, cause ya addressing me like you 'can't even see' the level of skills that ya need for battling/
when people ask for you to point out wack rappers, ya must have ya fingers cut off, 'cause ya can't point at me'/
I'm just proving to be the 'sickest thing underground', since psycotic bombers workin for sewage companies/
i'm havin ya all 'strung out' of this battle, like broken key strings on guitars/
even if i was to hand ya a nutrigrain, ya still couldnt have 'energy in your bars'/
good luck...
uppin
my brain hurts!
too much to read
both came fucken ill
every bar hit hard
punches=both
vocab=dariel
wordplay=dariel with a hair
my vote=dariel
both was nice
out
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YO THIS WAS AN OKAY BATTLE
BOTH HAD SOME ILL LINES BUT METH CAME WITH AHRDER AND MORE DIRECT PUNCHES
PLUS I LIKED HIS FLO BETTER
DARIEL U GOOD U GOT TALENT JUST NEED TO DO MORE BATTLES IN TEXT
FGAVE LINE FROM METH-
I know blondes are stupid, so Dariel is dumb as bleach,
smartest thing to come out of his mouth are wisdom teeth,
LOL
FAVE LINE FROM DARIEL-
i got ya caught in my 'rap' while i'm masked, so its like you never knew who did it like Peter Parker/
i got ya 'drowning under pressure' in this battle like i had you bench-pressin under water/
GOOD
VOTE-METH OVERALL BETTER BATTLE VERSE
OUT
Damn!
Good fuckin battle by both of u, wordplay from both was ill, punches were both good but i gotta give it to dariel, he came an inch iller, this was a nice long tight ass battle that i enjoyed readin tha whole way through.
Vote- Dariel
Peace.
METHEUS::
Your style guy?Nothing,fronting,when im around ya don’t test the god man,
this kids known to grip chrome and put a pound to ya chest like tarzan,
WOW.HELL OF A SETUP AND TARZAN PUNCH WAS REALLY GOOD.
I'm a vibrant rapper, my style based on point call it knives and daggers,
The final answer,fuck ya small verse, ask ya girl it's METH that matters,
NICE SHIT HERE..SETUP WAS COOL FLOWED NICE, SECOND COUPLET WAS ALSO GOOD METH THAT MATTERS TO HIS GIRL..NOT TOO HARD THOUGH
Amateur clone kids, are like birthday candles, stand to get blown quick,
paired with a knife I slice ur face in angles like a square,
& watch ur eyes & nose dangle from the top of ur stares,
FIRST LINE WAS FILLER,, BUT THEN YOU CAME BACK WITH THE KNIFE TO SLICE UR FACE IN ANGLE LIKE A SQUARD NOSE DANGLE SOME SHIT LIKE THAT..THAT WAS REALLY NICE VISUAL.
I know blondes are stupid, so Dariel is dumb as bleach,
smartest thing to come out of his mouth are wisdom teeth,
WHOA NICE WITTY PUNCH HERE.
Your nose broken,close wounds, watch the blows open,
& keep ya alive long enough to re-enact ya death in slow motion,
NICE HARD PUNCH ALSO
Facin bigger men, Dariel is no comp, he's feminine,
Been eating these sissy sweet asses,but now you're at the bitter end,
THIS WAS ALSO NICE.
Dariel, got outshined with wordplay, get blasted wit flare,
Meth must eat adultery cuz here i'm haveing an affair,
THIS WAS ALSO HARD, BUT NOT TOO EFFECTIVE.
dare his ass to write.. you and rap is just strange,
me winnin's the norm,like payphones don't expect change,
COOL
you already got beat, But lets finish this shit on a crazy end
note,
you'll never have my number, But i'll still pin you, Like an atm code,
NICE SETUP PUNCH COMBO
Dead froze, thought you'd win, Sorry Dariel,ya plan's flew to hell,
I'm extendin my index finger and thumb, Let me hand you the L,
NOW THIS WAS REALLY NICE PUNCH AND GREAT ENDING.
DARIEL SHARIEUM::
ya got more surprised looked in ya face then RB Smiles, when i dropped this like Super model panties infront of nerds/
can't believe ya posted that verse, well its behind me, cause you be gettin shit 'back-words'/
OK OPENING..BUT DIDNT HIT HARD ENOUGH , PUNCH WAS TOO EFFECTIVE MAN..BUT OK..
Metheus, i beat ya down 'son' like 'demestic violence', so biatch, ya can call me 'father'/
i spit 'harder' than a Playboy Bunny on Hue Hefner dosin viagra, and when i 'spit', i still 'cum farther'/
AGAIN NOT TOO EFFECTIVE..BLAH AT CUM LINES..PLAYED MAN...TOO PLAYED..
act like you supposed to be here while you 'hangin out', if thats so, find a tree and i'ma get tha 'rope'/
this kid take the win, like gettin away with racial slurs, when he trying call them 'colorful anicdotes'/
NOT FEELING IT.
i'm just going to be straight, son, you couldn't use 'word-play', if you was playin scrabble/
talk this, talk that, guess this nigga about a lot of babble, you be gettin' off 'point', i'ma help you by 'stabbin you'/
NOT FEELING THIS..SET UP IF WORDED BETTER WOULD OF BEEN GOOD.
the 'punchs' i am throwin are so dirty, its like i'm 'biting ears', Meth thought 'Mic-Tyson' was fighting/
Meth couldnt beat me battlin the dead, if you had someone 'ghost writting'/
BLAHHH
this geek be given me id software first person shooter games, cause he wants me to meet my 'doom'/
ya wasn't even 'off the hook', when the doctor cut your embiblical cord in the delivery room/
THIS WAS COOL..NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH..CAUSE THE SETUP RUINED IT
simply said, handless judges ain't the only reason why Metheus ain't gettin a 'thumbs up' for a vote/
ya couldn't spit a 'fresh' rhyme, even if before you spit on the mic, you was swishin round Scope/
OKKKK
i'm passin Meth Demerall, so when 'Meth ODs', maybe then he can add in the 'Man'/ (MethOD Man)
Meth dont deserve any masculine names, cause he nothin but a bitch, so i'm givin him back hands/
OK BASIC SHIT
i got ya caught in my 'rap' while i'm masked, so its like you never knew who did it like Peter Parker/
i got ya 'drowning under pressure' in this battle like i had you bench-pressin under water/
NOT BAD AT ALL
ya 'cumin' on the mic to battle me like you needed artificial limps for masterbating, cause ya be weak at gripping/
ya like blind rappers, cause ya addressing me like you 'can't even see' the level of skills that ya need for battling/
OK
when people ask for you to point out wack rappers, ya must have ya fingers cut off, 'cause ya can't point at me'/
I'm just proving to be the 'sickest thing underground', since psycotic bombers workin for sewage companies/
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS..NOT EFFECTIVE..
i'm havin ya all 'strung out' of this battle, like broken key strings on guitars/
even if i was to hand ya a nutrigrain, ya still couldnt have 'energy in your bars'/
ALRIGHT..NOT A GREAT ENDING..SHOULD OF CAME A BIT HARDER HERE.
UMM BOTH VERSES WERE COOL BUT MAN I TELL YOU I VOTE FAIR..BUT THIS BATTLE WAS ONESIDED METHEUS CAME WITH SOME ILL WITTY WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES. DARIEL YOU CAME OK BUT GOT REALLY BORING.
VOTE FOR METHEUS A BETTER ALL AROUND VERSE
2-2... this is close, uppin..
Dariel:
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Dariel Shariem
[B]i spit 'harder' than a Playboy Bunny on Hue Hefner dosin viagra, and when i 'spit', i still 'cum farther'/
come on look at these lines... dariel had betta vocab...the 'punchs' i am throwin are so dirty, its like i'm 'biting ears', Meth thought 'Mic-Tyson' was fighting/
he had betta word play.... betta punches...
METHEUS:
^^^ this is an ok line, but i didn't like it that much...this kids known to grip chrome and put a pound to ya chest like tarzan
He had some ok punches and shit.. some ok vocab, but dariel took this battle eazily
VOTE= Dariel Sharium ( lol@nickname )
Achievement through Exhaustion!
3-2 ...
uppin
OUTSIDE JUDGES PICKED METHEUS 3-0
METHEUS- 3-0
DARIEL SHARIUM- 2-1
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