Could of Been

[Stlshowmegurl]

Is it a game or u doin this just to mantain
i want to understand are u willingly doing this to hurt my name
i just wanted me and you to be friends
but u in this industry fuccing up over and over again
i thought we were true homies till the end
i thought u had my back as u did way back when
u hurt the most important person who showed u the way
The way to suceed the way to brush off all yo enemies
but u must of found another way to breathe
Could it be u fucced me over for a little air time
Cuzz u thought it was the easiest way for u to get down
Another producer flown u a check u gotta a little high
And thought this was your pass.
U did your song and now u oweing everybody some cash
Sorry fo ya u should of stuck with us, yo hommies from the pass
cuzz right now in the present, your hit could of been number 1
cuzz tomorrow and the future, you could of been that number 1 mc
But shit u fucced me over for some different air to breathe
just shit on me just shit on me


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[J-RIPPA]

7/10 it was kinda weak no wordplay or u did have sturutre but no flow
~1~

[sILLable]

no wordplay..no structure what so ever..your lines were too stretched in some places....you need some complexity....and some wordplay and some vocab ..and be more creative and read the rules before you drp something in here..all in all needs elevation..~1~