i PPRECIATE IT..THNKS...UP.
i PPRECIATE IT..THNKS...UP.
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thats was a pretty cool piece.. you could see you put some thought into it.. but the multi's sorta seemed force in this.. but flow was good.. structure was good.. but i wonder how the verse would look if you put it at regular size.. iono.. i jst hate it wen peeps put the font size hella small because their bars are too long.. but yeah.. nice drop
yo that shit wuz hot dawg.keep dropin them like this one.stay up homie
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i jus dont give a fuk
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well the Multis werent forced luckily for me...and the bars were as ong as i wanted them...puttin your piece in a small font makes it looked more organized and well...it just looks better.....but it would be cool if the multis were forced...then youd be right...just cause you didnt understand some of the words and what not doesnt mean the multis were forced...all in all keep trying to reply correctly..j/p....thnks...up.
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I guess it was pretty good..could use more advanced rhymes though and maybe a pinch more of vocabulary,but overall,i liked it.
You had multies in there..
Just throuw in alittle more rhymes,more complex...like instead of death/best..something like Development/angelian/eloquent.
+1541 DALC
Pulsating angel undulating beneath 44,000 leagues of utter chaos...
Knowledge radiating through linear distribution of the industrial cove...
Molding the intangible ethreal fabric of a glossopalatinus marzipan....
-Archspecies 8
NOTHING WILL STOP MY ACHE!
I WANNA FUCK ALL THIS SHIT I HAVE TO TAKE!!
My enlightened state of mind my desperate DECISION!
I find serenity in so much,pain,
Slit my wrists and let my body,drain,
Clench my fists and let my life slip,away,
Cuz' only she can stop all this,pain,
And only she can stop this fucking,pain,
I just wish these sick thoughts would..GO AWAY
And fucking stop the ache thats down deep inside.-Suicide of The Cephalo Pictorial
When Im down to my last breath,
Im gonna climb the empire state building-
Get to the last step,and still have half left.-Eminem
yea
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well another idiot in RB...this isnt poetry fucktard..go to poetic scriptures..youll find your poetry there..fuckin idiot
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man that shit was fuckin nuts i could read that shit a hundred times and think it was as good as the first time i read it thats fuckin tight man sickest shit ive ever seen on this site
that was some real shit...........keep droppin.......Originally Posted by :TreaZoN:
Brilliant! see yall this is what we need on front lines.................Werdplay and Vocab
thanks..i appreciate it...up.
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wow i really liked this. not really much feedback i can give cuz it was perfect. the vocab was dope and it was just really tite
thnks
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that shit is just hot. straight off tha stove.
somthin from deep inside man its real.
really nice, liked it alot... keep it up yo..