leave me alone hoe

[O_know]

why aint u pickin up ya phone bitch
i know u aint chillen at ya home all alone bitch
you locked the door..
u gettin cock ya whore?
cant u just stop for four
seconds let me in to get my shit quick
im thru with u i got other bitches
they better the pussy more tight and~
i be beatin it up like we be fightin
ya imma keep it real with you
im just not feelin you..its time to get rid of you
im back single again ready to mingle again
i just turned the celly off try ringin again
ya just to much of a handful U slut
i dont wanna have to handle U slut
more drama than a TNTs movie
time to cancel u like just shoot me

[StRiNgThEoRy]

hell no....way too disrespectful on that shit....you rhymin the same word twice and shit too....elevate and stop hatin......you sayin shit like "you locked the door. u gettin cock ya whore?" angry if she was cheatin, den u go and say "i got other bitches" ????

Homie please.....

[StRiNgThEoRy]

Oh, and the title is like the opposite of the first two lines, u doin topical then stick to the damn subject.....leave me alona you hoe, but u banging at her door...
...lol@wakness....

[Soul Shocker]

Na man just wasnt feeling your shit.You need 2 elevate big time.Just keep trying and i'll look up your shit next time.no h8 iight

[<Supreme>]

still shit.
elevate
this is basicly ure other piece with a bit more crap added on
i aint scorin it

[b_rEEz]

Didnt like it at all, like stringtheory said, WAYyy to disrespectful, instead of sayin "gettin cock you whore" maybe say somethin along the lines of "like i aint seen this before" dont call her out on everything, even tho you may feel it, its still not cool...and your topic had nothing to do with the write....anyway yeah..