10 lines
3 votes=tko
no hatin pleez
verse's due a half hour after check in
CHECK!!! time start when u check in
mc maybe
MaRVJay
10 lines
3 votes=tko
no hatin pleez
verse's due a half hour after check in
CHECK!!! time start when u check in
aiight 10 lines 30 mins...... peace
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lets go fuck boy check in u was popin madd shit
ayo check it...
dawg we all no u cant spit it so listen stop,
coz maybe settin fire to ya scriptures only time ur writtens hots,
your missin drops, like constipated birds coastin n merv,
you couldnt win this battle even if maybe ghosted your verse,
broken with words like a spineless book hardly on this,
and the truth is ive seen harder covers on marvels comics,
pardon dog its, funny how u be defeeted faster than japanese carpets,
see this dude, like battlin lingeri i just see it though,
all your boys know me, shit your homies for me would leave ya crew,
coz honestly man ur just a liar... my dick been in more queens than you...
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nobody on dis site cares about whut dis fuckin dick is spittin.
he dont freestyle his verse like "nas cd" cuzz "it was written".
kid's madd cuzz i aint wanna battle him...fam u borin 4real.
ya name MC MayBE..and y cuzz even u aint sure of ya skillz.
u neva prove yaself ..but got nerve da say i aint betta than u??.
cut ya hands off..so dis winter u dont have worry bout "catchin da flu".
u can go hate..u aint even a no weight.lil homo ya fuckin flows fake.
you & ya friends 'share sneaker's' so ya'll really "sole mates".(soul)
hoe wait!!! stop actin tuff knowin you were sandals and tight jeans.
you 23 if i was rap like you shit i would of stop spittin around 19.
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vsdawg we all no u cant spit it so listen stop,
coz maybe settin fire to ya scriptures only time ur writtens hots,<--good flow/playedconcept
your missin drops, like constipated birds coastin n merv,
you couldnt win this battle even if maybe ghosted your verse,<--good punch
broken with words like a spineless book hardly on this,
and the truth is ive seen harder covers on marvels comics,<---good flow/decent punch
pardon dog its, funny how u be defeeted faster than japanese carpets,
see this dude, like battlin lingeri i just see it though,<---no
all your boys know me, shit your homies for me would leave ya crew,
coz honestly man ur just a liar... my dick been in more queens than you...<---decent punch/ending
personals - marvnobody on dis site cares about whut dis fuckin dick is spittin.
he dont freestyle his verse like "nas cd" cuzz "it was written".<--good punch/opener
kid's madd cuzz i aint wanna battle him...fam u borin 4real.
ya name MC MayBE..and y cuzz even u aint sure of ya skillz.<--decent punch
u neva prove yaself ..but got nerve da say i aint betta than u??.
cut ya hands off..so dis winter u dont have worry bout "catchin da flu"<--good punch
u can go hate..u aint even a no weight.lil homo ya fuckin flows fake.
you & ya friends 'share sneaker's' so ya'll really "sole mates".(soul)<--good punch/flow wit multi's
hoe wait!!! stop actin tuff knowin you were sandals and tight jeans.
you 23 if i was rap like you shit i would of stop spittin around 19.<--decent ending
punches - marv
structure - tie
flow - marv
creativity - marv
both had good verses. good battle. lotta nice punches everywhere
marv came more consistent w/ his punches n stronga flow
no diss
v - marv
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lol defeeted faster than japanese carpets--- u know how them fools take their shoes off before stepin on... yah leave feedback ONLY if you understand 1-0 merv.. uppin this ish.
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Punches- Jay
Personals- Jay
Vocab- Jay
Wordplay- Jay
V/ Jay no hate
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Originally Posted by Cartman
ok this battle was aight but striaght up goes to marv j for better overall verse harder punches and some very nice concepts.
there was bit of creativity in mc maybes verse so i prop you for that, try to throw in some multies to ad to the flow... and some personals , like marv, not a bad verse over all tho i laughed more at marv jays disses then mc maybes both should try some multis tho vote marv j
fuck you
LOLLLLLLLLLL u guys are useless.... marvells comics... is a personal... so is the line about queens--- where he lives in his info ish... but neways... i know i owned this dude, yall prolly didnt even read the verses... re read it for the multis u might learn sommin, good battle.. (not really you still suck cock and ur verse is smh merv) but yah
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lol...know what swawying means?
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u know what gay means of course u do coz ur boyfriend merv told me you did... smote smotely... eat my penis... sway... hah you sway more than flags on american holidays... u fuckin anus... eat mine and fuckin bonce like ur owner... ur friend= pwned. eat my dick
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Smh, wordplay your trash.
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dis was the most one sided battle i have read all damn day cuz mc maybe dropped compltely wack u need to read some damn tutorials or something cuz dat was terrible and seems like marv dropped nice just to embarras yo wack ass verse even more roflmao
v/marv
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