I don't know what you guys was reading but it wasn't that hot. It was alright I mean it's apparent that you guys are friends or something from the way that you are talking about this piece. I don't care for it that much because this has been done before maybe if jay-z hadn't done it first then I would have liked a lot more better. Your structure was good and your topic was fine. But your rhyming was basic nothing special what really got me was when somebody said this was a deep piece. WOW but no diss man you know I like it. But I'm not going to kiss your azz and worship your ground or nothing like that.
yea, Nahlidge what were you thinking? you shoulda had lines like

"they phsycotic, mutlibiotic state of slitting her own mammal wrists"

I mean that's the good, deep shit.