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i'm spit the truth and im'a spit it right//
you might as well quit you havn't been in a battle since you been on this site//
You've ducked every emcee like incomin bill in this case//
if the 78 year old lawyer ducked like you chaney couldn't have shot him in the face//
you talk a lot of game but wont do shit
this has got to be a trick because trickspit cant spit
the real thing is that you ain't tuff you bark loud//
a blue bandanna sleeveless shirt and tattoes shouldn’t make you proud
I snuff you out like burning inscent your sweet through the nose so beg your pardon//
you not a hustler so act Mexican and mow somebodies garden//
when it comes to flow, your like a wack mc that pulls a no show
when you spit it's far from hot it's more like 20 below
ice cream i see why you pick that name cause every kid gets a lick
child molestation spreading the crab infestation are you sick?
dope just ain't ya thing, i can tell by the weak verse you bring
tear ya verse apart like it was made of some flimsy thread or string
if you were a brand of saop you'd be a step under the rest
because your ryhmes and drops just lack that desired zest
you steppin up was like pullin my thrigger for me
i took aim and let slugs go and the rest is history
uppin1
uppin #1 come on ppl dont sleep on this lets get some honest votes
Um...
Trick: Kinda Weak Verse, The Attempted Punches.. Some Connected, Others Didnt. You Need To Work On That. Tighten Up Your Structure & Flow A Little More And Your There With That. But Its The Consistancy Again You Need To Work On. The Punches Need To Come Stronger.
Ice Cream: Your Verse Was Weak, Againt No Constant Hitting Punches. Each Punch You Did Throw, Really Didnt Hit Hard. The Personals You Used Were Wack, No Concepts. The Rest Was Jus Fillers & Outstretched Bars.
Both: Work On Your Consistancy And Your Flow & Structure. Read Up On LLL Battles.
\/ - Trick. For Attempting and Throwing Some Connecting Punches
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v// ice cream
nice finisher ^^Originally Posted by Ice Cream
vs.
just no^^
ice cream came down way harder with punches da packed bows, and his personals came down pretty decent too
trickspit was more playd and too basic
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uppin#2 lets get more honest votes on this ppl
uppin #3 don't sleep on this ppl get some vgotes up in here
uppin
uppin#4 lets get this battle closed plz
I snuff you out like burning inscent your sweet through the nose so beg your pardon//
you not a hustler so act Mexican and mow somebodies garden//
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V/Ice Cream (better verse)
He had a better verse and better punche's. Trickspit your stuff was played/basic. Elevate. Read LLL battle's and work in the cypher. I vote for Ice Cream becuase he had one decent line in his verse. This battle was one sided and weak.
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