I made a mistake and made the last thread wrong so IGNORE that one and it can be deleted.....
But anyway the real battle
House rules
i spit first, blitz spits as soon as he's online
unlimited lines.
Blitz905
Casito
I made a mistake and made the last thread wrong so IGNORE that one and it can be deleted.....
But anyway the real battle
House rules
i spit first, blitz spits as soon as he's online
unlimited lines.
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mmmmmm kate
I go onto bitchslapped and guess what i see
Blitz talkin' this that 'bout how he gonna merk me?,
Please B dont let your eyes deceive thee
I kill wannabes in one verse dont think just believe me,
What makes me laugh is blitz thinks he's number one
When in battle its his raps that blow up and come undone,
Waitin for your verse gets rappers all bemused
Like a countdown on a bomb that only gets defused,
Lose to you hell no nigga i refuse
Like every single woman you attempted to use,
Let this be a lesson not to judge a book by its cover
Shit wait you dont read, you get read to by ya mother,
I think you should go out take a pencil and rubber
With any luck itll be talent you find and flow you discover...
end.
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mmmmmm kate
i see half the time u rap about gunz on stage
thats allright wit me but i didnt kno u can say wanksta in every page
u remind me like that 50 cent attackin every on rapper like game
its a damn shame you gotta be lame like that so whos too blame??
so listen here boy imma be like my boy split an make u flip
like tourrettes guy an say bob saggot 50 million times
an since im a good guy i'll be like chucky
an just use my raps by spittin in ur eye an consider your self lucky
so after u bein impressed wit this flo
since your so gangsta in that dress y dont u suck on ya tony yayo
im waistin time too take out no doubt but its all the truth fuck the youth cause we all know the bibles fuckt up there is no jesus christ or god its all bullshit basicly a fuckin fraud
ya'll cannot be serious. both verses were horrible. absolutely no punches and no metas, just lyrics which can be good half of the time. i gotta go with casito cauze at least he tried to hit hard and he had better flow. as for blitz, what happened to your rhyme?
so listen here boy imma be like my boy split an make u flip
like tourrettes guy an say bob saggot 50 million times
I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
it would sound better on the mic cuase the way i put it i put my rhymes in the sentence im spittin so if that was on the mic it would sound like a bunch of multis so i just needa lot more work on my textin oh well
im waistin time too take out no doubt but its all the truth fuck the youth cause we all know the bibles fuckt up there is no jesus christ or god its all bullshit basicly a fuckin fraud
Uppin.........
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mmmmmm kate
Voting = close of thread
^simple DO IT
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mmmmmm kate
Please B dont let your eyes deceive thee
I kill wannabes in one verse dont think just believe me,
vs nothing.
Castio you have the basics of battling just alot of your punches are to simple and have no wit at all, try to come with more witty punches and throw some hard personals. Blitz read LLL you need alot of work and LLL could help you alot, dont space out your bars either. shit looks wack. v/casito hit the sig.
Empire
hmmm bad battle...but castio gets my vote becuz he had a verse..lol.....it was simple and basic but he threw punches somewhat..juss get more complex...both of you....
v//castio
Thanks for the advice, i will elevate. ok 2 more votes and then this can close..... UPPIN
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mmmmmm kate
just 2 more votes peoples, spare 2 seconds?? lol
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mmmmmm kate
ok peoples just TWO more votes and then i can stop bothering everyone with uppin's lol. so can sombody spare like one minute to post a vote?
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mmmmmm kate
vote blitz
i like this line: "so listen here boy imma be like my boy split an make u flip
like tourrettes guy an say bob saggot 50 million times"
even if it doesn't really rhyme much, still sorta funny and....he put spaces between his lines, how cute, so he gets my vote fah shawnshizzle, suburbanitez in da pancake
You're momma's so fat...How fat is she???
When she sits on the toilet to take a shit her ass cheeks touch the ground!
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damn yo, my beezy didn't realize i had to have me 100 posts under my belt, i'll go post up some threads ya hurd and ya smells me fa shizzle-ation nation
You're momma's so fat...How fat is she???
When she sits on the toilet to take a shit her ass cheeks touch the ground!
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I go onto bitchslapped and guess what i see
Blitz talkin' this that 'bout how he gonna merk me?,
Please B dont let your eyes deceive thee
I kill wannabes in one verse dont think just believe me,
What makes me laugh is blitz thinks he's number one
When in battle its his raps that blow up and come undone,
Waitin for your verse gets rappers all bemused
Like a countdown on a bomb that only gets defused,
Lose to you hell no nigga i refuse
Like every single woman you attempted to use,
Let this be a lesson not to judge a book by its cover
Shit wait you dont read, you get read to by ya mother,
I think you should go out take a pencil and rubber
With any luck itll be talent you find and flow you discover...
end.
Vs.
Nothing...
Wow another weak battle...u guys really need to consider reading vet. battles b4 doing some shit...casito gets this one for dropping a weak but harder verse...and blitz stop with the nasty structure and actually make ur punches hit...and for future reference.. flip & times dont ryme.... ~1~
Vote=Casito
In proper word's im an MC's definition
And now im shine'n like a star so I suggest you get to wishin.