Im not really a fan of the whole "Dude, that was awesome, & this was perfect, & that was stupendous." Style of feedback, I myseld can see numerous things of which I should be critisised for in this piece, I just dont think Jon Dagel wants me to see them lol,
Thanks Engivale, & I see what you mean by the line breaks & stuff, I have this thing were everything has to look nice & neat, it is an enemy at times, thanks anyway man, if you have a piece you want fed just leave a link or Ill see what I come across, I'll hit the one in your sig up soon as I can, too, probably tonight.