Im Going 6 Feet Under

[Decade]

Still Smells Brand New, Da Suit Must Not Be A Rental
This Box Aint Very Big What Hell Have I Gotten Into
My Eyes I Cant Open n I Cant Seem To Get A Breath
Must be An Open Casket Cause - All I See Is Red

Who picked the music playin'?, No Wonder They're All Sad
I've heard A 100 Voices Not One Of Them Was My Dad
I Wanna Forgive The Ones That Made Confessions ...
When I Was Alive U Werent Honest But I Had My Assumptions

I Wish I Could Cry, Cuz This Is Harder To Take
than Going To Your Mother's Or Your Best Friends Wake
And I Know Its Not Their Fault, But I Still Let Them Cry
As They Stand There And Say I Was A Wonderful Guy

Its Not Uncommon For You To Have A Wake Like This
Infact You'll All Go Threw It Minus A Couple Of Guests
Till Then See You When I See You ...
Say What Up To Saint Peter !


Links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...st-357154.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...se-357082.html

[BriK YeLLa]

decent i like how it first started it kinda got watery towards the end but the first two lines pulled me from clickin my mouse,it could have been longer but nice

[.SuiGeneris.]

This must've been a quick key. This piece had potential, you could've build it up more instead of going straight to the point and that's the peoblen. If you don't have good mechanics then the straight foward won't work. The flow was cool, could've been better. You had emotion and that was the strongest point in your piece. The weakest, hmmmm the concept and having no build up but overall this was decent...

[Decade]

Got Stoned And Had A Vision

[Boxin Mics]

yo this was decent no matter how its looked at. a bit short id say but screw it. also I have to agree with Sui on this one. you couldv'e built it up more instead of going right to the point. keep the flows coming. hopefully ill see more from you.. try to practice on some multi's, too..

[Decade]

Thanks I Thought It Was Pretty Deep



Uppin Time After Time