This is me mates peice he sent to me from prison, i want to get some feedback so i can send it back to him, so please feed.
God, how can you allow so many people to starve,
when kids are eating from garbage,
how can they reach for the stars,
we all know it exists, but treat it like a mirage,
while governments spend billions on a mission to mars,
we,ve destroyed our own planet with pollution from cars,
all these bastards in charge need to think with thier hearts,
reach out to the homeless that are sleeping in parks,
society is fucked, now we need to restart,
theres too many innocent people that are locked behind bars,
when sick fucks say child pornographys expression on art,
why are there natural disasters, that rip cities apart,
leaving hard working families left with nothing but scars,
did you really intend life to be so hard,
and people to be judged by their status and class,
is it part of your plan, or have you left us in the dark,
is there heaven, when i die will i see the angels and harps,
if i beleive in jeus christ, have i chose the right path,
will i be supplied eternal life, or will i hear deamons laugh,
these are just a few questions, many more to ask.
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