aint on ya shit.....new nigga ready run shit ya he

[Jayo5jugalocrim3]

aint on ya shit/
the rymes you spit dont fuckin make since/
like ah fuckin bitch tryna be president/
i stay on my grind/
keep my flow all tight an shit/
pull out verbs and shit you never heard of/
sleep on me if you want/
i'll make you never heard of/
that means murder muder/
redrum/
when the beat hit all u hear is drum/
fill ya bitch full of cum/
then kill her ass an leave her in a ditch/
listen to the shit i pitch/
were i come from we dont like ya if u snitch/
poke ya up and call u a lil' punk bitch/
you flows stank like ah fish ass pus/
i'm comander in chief lik bush/
your rymes wouldnt make it to the top if you was high off orange kush/
i make this shit look easy/
on the real, my shit stay on the tip of my tounge/
just like ya breezy/
if you dont feel me then fuck you/
you dont kno real talent if it came up and bitch slapped ya/
on the first 48 cause i clapped ya/
trapped ya, in a body bag/
tag toes an shit/
chain so big like i'm a beast/
pitbull an shit/
i aint lookin for no hand out/
i'm hungry ya heard, like thanksgiving i'm ready to feast/
on all you fake ass mcees/
break ya off at the knees like mugsy back in the days/
smokin the goody goody/
still rockin dat dre day/
keep it old school/
just like my cutty

man fuck it, i'm through i can do this shit all day

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WOW man you really need to elevare you need to have better flow and vocab pretty muc better everything Vocab was basic as fuck you should go to the HOF and read some peices and that might give you an idea no hate just pointers and you need to post 2 links you left feed on

[Jayo5jugalocrim3]

haha lmao keep sleep brah

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AY i was just tryin to give you pointers that shyt was mad weak

[Jayo5jugalocrim3]

haha my shit weak huh, still lmao

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just trying to help you homie