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    Re: The Human Condition

    Quote Originally Posted by Reflex. View Post
    long bar, didn't kill the flow totally..

    couple good inner multi's..

    over all, not a bad piece..

    I don't have strong feelings either good or bad tho.

    Took the word right outta my mouth...

    IMO this piece coulda easily been made for audio, you just woulda had to have made adjustments to say what you wanted to say while keeping the rhyme scheme up... I saw skill in the piece but it woulda been even better if it flowed better...

    If you don't care about changing up ya structure though then you executed the topic pretty well...


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    Re: The Human Condition

    Quote Originally Posted by nineties flava View Post
    Took the word right outta my mouth...

    IMO this piece coulda easily been made for audio, you just woulda had to have made adjustments to say what you wanted to say while keeping the rhyme scheme up... I saw skill in the piece but it woulda been even better if it flowed better...

    If you don't care about changing up ya structure though then you executed the topic pretty well...


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