10 Lines
Due by Tommorow
_raptor
BroKen
10 Lines
Due by Tommorow
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With you being so “dirty”, how do you expect me to be fair?
Cause dude always calls for extensions…like chicks with bad hair
Better bow down and listen to my wishes…the king has spoken
Like this dude’s put a wrong URL here….this Link’s BroKen
You want me to lie down, kid’ll dickride me till the end of the match
When it burns him on his ass….he’ll have scars on him like his past
Don’t explode yo, just because I denied you and all of your love B
How am I truly weak as fuck…when you flow like your girl, monthly
The Front Lines looking at me, well ya’ll better smile and sit back
When the fact that I spit bars… make’s this kid hungry for a Kit-Kat
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=402235
kids fucking with greats and expecting none of the mods to mind
so when his banned its understandable his writing pieces of his own kind
ill leave ya broken and tattered, guns blazing like it aint matter
so if ya splatter, we'll peep your bloody lyrics and all scatter
whatever! im clever i drop luckily and throw divinely when i spit
when you kiss their arses so hard your saliva's laced with there shit
raptor's pushing these accusations like a seed through mud im sprouting
ill twist this bitch like tree trunks and move his frame like i move mountains
and kid your insulting the rap game but vs king ancel u had your arse shifted
so any feedback saying your dope.. .......is like calling retarded people gifted
Broken-
With you being so “dirty”, how do you expect me to be fair?
Cause dude always calls for extensions…like chicks with bad hair
good setup, played punch
Better bow down and listen to my wishes…the king has spoken
Like this dude’s put a wrong URL here….this Link’s BroKen
meh ok
You want me to lie down, kid’ll dickride me till the end of the match
When it burns him on his ass….he’ll have scars on him like his past
liked this
Don’t explode yo, just because I denied you and all of your love B
How am I truly weak as fuck…when you flow like your girl, monthly
hehe pretty good
The Front Lines looking at me, well ya’ll better smile and sit back
When the fact that I spit bars… make’s this kid hungry for a Kit-Kat
weak, played
vs
raptor-
kids fucking with greats and expecting none of the mods to mind
so when his banned its understandable his writing pieces of his own kind
actually liked this one
ill leave ya broken and tattered, guns blazing like it aint matter
so if ya splatter, we'll peep your bloody lyrics and all scatter
had potential, wording was off
whatever! im clever i drop luckily and throw divinely when i spit
when you kiss their arses so hard your saliva's laced with there shit
that was played, and not because it was about me and lucky because of his "spit being laced"...that's played
raptor's pushing these accusations like a seed through mud im sprouting
ill twist this bitch like tree trunks and move his frame like i move mountains
ok i guess. you're rapping like an audio battle would sound like
and kid your insulting the rap game but vs king ancel u had your arse shifted
so any feedback saying your dope.. .......is like calling retarded people gifted
good closer
this was a close battle. raptor get's it because he came slightly wittier with more misdirection and creativity here.
v/raptor
upp
This battle was hardly worth reading through..
Broken- You gotta improve that elementary flow. Your verse lacked solid punches and complexity, and had no quotables. Don't pretend something sounds good, Know whether or not it does.
Raptor- Your text is better than your opponents clearly, but you still need to elevate.. make the connections on your personals and punches more obvious and to the point. Your concepts weren't horrible but the setups made most appear so.
Best Bars>
whatever! im clever i drop luckily and throw divinely when i spit
when you kiss their arses so hard your saliva's laced with there shit
^bad setup but decent enough punch,,
v.s.
With you being so “dirty”, how do you expect me to be fair?
Cause dude always calls for extensions…like chicks with bad hair
^decent setup but the punch was played and delivered poorly.
So yeah, I gotta vote Raptor for the better bar..
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opener: broken
nameplay/wordplay: raptor
metaphors: raptor
multies: broken (once)
flow/structure: broken
personals: none
punches: raptor
closer: raptor
overall: raptor, nice battle ya'll
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"Hair is almost out my scalp, having nightmares of terrorists outside my house
with a bomb strapped ta my therapist why im found high on my couch"
word upppp
broken kinda slick with the wordplays but you are goin down a played route.. your indicating misdirections, but really they arent there, because if you remove the dots the words flow the same.. misdirections should take up a syllables spot the way i see it
raptor youre certainly clever enough, but some your rhymes are loose, and your flow is kinda rushed.. normally im kinda critical of bars that diss me, but you aint never battled me or divine that i recall... have you? i mean unless im right about your true identity
then and only then does that bar work for me... welllll... even so this dude hasnt hardly said a word to me...unless it was with an alternate ID... ah, well... you still brought it fresher than broken
V/rap
you rap like ibeastout votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...177/index.html
^^^
Broken-
With you being so “dirty”, how do you expect me to be fair?
Cause dude always calls for extensions…like chicks with bad hair
aight
Better bow down and listen to my wishes…the king has spoken
Like this dude’s put a wrong URL here….this Link’s BroKen
nah
You want me to lie down, kid’ll dickride me till the end of the match
When it burns him on his ass….he’ll have scars on him like his past
nah
Don’t explode yo, just because I denied you and all of your love B
How am I truly weak as fuck…when you flow like your girl, monthly
nice
The Front Lines looking at me, well ya’ll better smile and sit back
When the fact that I spit bars… make’s this kid hungry for a Kit-Kat
nah
vs
raptor-
kids fucking with greats and expecting none of the mods to mind
so when his banned its understandable his writing pieces of his own kind
no
ill leave ya broken and tattered, guns blazing like it aint matter
so if ya splatter, we'll peep your bloody lyrics and all scatter
no
whatever! im clever i drop luckily and throw divinely when i spit
when you kiss their arses so hard your saliva's laced with there shit
no
raptor's pushing these accusations like a seed through mud im sprouting
ill twist this bitch like tree trunks and move his frame like i move mountains
ok
and kid your insulting the rap game but vs king ancel u had your arse shifted
so any feedback saying your dope.. .......is like calling retarded people gifted
nice
i give it to Raptor barely
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/martyr-vs-macc-402333/index.html
With you being so “dirty”, how do you expect me to be fair?
Cause dude always calls for extensions…like chicks with bad hair
mehh
Better bow down and listen to my wishes…the king has spoken
Like this dude’s put a wrong URL here….this Link’s BroKen
lol weak. nahh
You want me to lie down, kid’ll dickride me till the end of the match
When it burns him on his ass….he’ll have scars on him like his past
nope, bad rhyming
Don’t explode yo, just because I denied you and all of your love B
How am I truly weak as fuck…when you flow like your girl, monthly
okishh, badly wording can see the concept yet still a weak concept
The Front Lines looking at me, well ya’ll better smile and sit back
When the fact that I spit bars… make’s this kid hungry for a Kit-Kat
lol no
vS
kids fucking with greats and expecting none of the mods to mind
so when his banned its understandable his writing pieces of his own kind
nahh
ill leave ya broken and tattered, guns blazing like it aint matter
so if ya splatter, we'll peep your bloody lyrics and all scatter
no wit at all, bad
whatever! im clever i drop luckily and throw divinely when i spit
when you kiss their arses so hard your saliva's laced with there shit
better
raptor's pushing these accusations like a seed through mud im sprouting
ill twist this bitch like tree trunks and move his frame like i move mountains
meh
and kid your insulting the rap game but vs king ancel u had your arse shifted
so any feedback saying your dope.. .......is like calling retarded people gifted
ok closer
Votes got to go to raptor
let me take you to the movies.
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