REMATCH: Immaculate VS. luckily77777

[The Seven]

10 lines due in 24 house rules
consider this my chik checkity chika chooka chunka check mufucker

[The Seven]

i hate this waitin shit....lol... ima drop

Look at this immaculate bitch ass and his fucked text
you never know who IJL will recruit next
ill just make like im pissed at the alphabet and say fuck 'm
IJL picked you but they might as well have picked chuck m
because this fucker cant rap, he just get a lot of daps from social climbers
hit him with this missile and drop him back to that crew of pedo minors
you could tell by the way immac punches, then says “excuse me”,
this chumps punches are like the hawaiian kind , a little fruity
he act like he lookin for a style , but he never let a vet get a word in
the fact about immac is that hes immaculate .... like a virgin

[Immaculate™]

Check

[PI-Benét]

first of all to Luckily77777 you got so many problems with your rap, i dont really know where to start... your structure is too curt... terse... you know rap is about putting words into interesting patterns of rhyme, trying to come up with fresh and relevant ways of looking at people and situations... among text battlers complexity is valued.. original wordplay... tight rhyming structures... the right cadence... all of these things a good rap should have ... so look at battles of the so called vets, and see if you can find a more relevant approach. Immaculate doesnt even have to put a verse and still wins.

[Immaculate™]

either way i'm not dropping the fuck boy didn't spell my name right in the polls so nope

[bob the builder]

first of all to Luckily77777 you got so many problems with your rap, i dont really know where to start... your structure is too curt... terse... you know rap is about putting words into interesting patterns of rhyme, trying to come up with fresh and relevant ways of looking at people and situations... among text battlers complexity is valued.. original wordplay... tight rhyming structures... the right cadence... all of these things a good rap should have ... so look at battles of the so called vets, and see if you can find a more relevant approach. Immaculate doesnt even have to put a verse and still wins.

ultimate douche, somebody kill this fag.

wait i already did.

[Sand]

I didn't think your verse was that bad at all. You've gotten better and that is what counts, I don't know what that guy was talking about to be honest, your structure was decent and your shit is getting better. I liked the chuckM line ahahahaha, nothing too witty but funny nonetheless. Keep writing, stay up man

[Sand]

either way i'm not dropping the fuck boy didn't spell my name right in the polls so nope

He did spell it right he just forgot the period haha, you guys should reset the battle then and drop regardless, because it almost looks like you are trying to duck him or some shit.

[Leonidas]

Closed. No Win given.

Make a new thread with a correct poll if you two agree to