King Ancel Vs. Cinizter

[Cinizter]

10 lines.
Verse due after Check-ins.
G'luck.

[Cinizter]

Check!.

[Cinizter]

my 10.

I make ground beef of this burger King for all his random sinning
with stellar wordplays...watch me (c)ancel his chance of winning
I roll with the punches, the type that leave holes in ya chest
See, your verse started with nothing and still got most of it left
I'ma rip this fiend cause on any scale I rate sick and mean
Kill this faggot in style like doing drive-by's in limousines
Snatching your raggedy mic cause your bars are plain dyslexic
Ya verse was the first time I needed subtitles for a text message!
Your family tree consists of weak bitches and lame fucks
ya mother's son got talent....
thats cause Networth been steppin his game up.

[Rant]

lol....


i see you like to flip lines...well bro that won't help you win
you must be baptized, the way your NEVER original cin'
bitch give up on it, HIM. this dude's a hoe, no good lines
his future's lookin dim...
....but that makes sense with his lines.
10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
AND you suck, back it up. i don't have to smack this fuck
this could be dumb luck, or any other way to say you winnins whack as fuck
i dont need a closer bitch, your closed wounds r opened up
so fuck swingin fists im tryin to hit you with a fucking truck..


pussy.

[Immaculate™]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...565/index.html

^^^^^


Cinizter
I make ground beef of this burger King for all his random sinning
with stellar wordplays...watch me (c)ancel his chance of winning
no
I roll with the punches, the type that leave holes in ya chest
See, your verse started with nothing and still got most of it left
played
I'ma rip this fiend cause on any scale I rate sick and mean
Kill this faggot in style like doing drive-by's in limousines
wack
Snatching your raggedy mic cause your bars are plain dyslexic
Ya verse was the first time I needed subtitles for a text message!
ehhhh
Your family tree consists of weak bitches and lame fucks
ya mother's son got talent....
thats cause Networth been steppin his game up.
naww



King Ancel
see you like to flip lines...well bro that won't help you win
you must be baptized, the way your NEVER original cin'
Ehhh
bitch give up on it, HIM. this dude's a hoe, no good lines
his future's lookin dim...
....but that makes sense with his lines.
Same word rhymes
10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
Nice...
AND you suck, back it up. i don't have to smack this fuck
this could be dumb luck, or any other way to say you winnins whack as fuck
naw
i dont need a closer bitch, your closed wounds r opened up
so fuck swingin fists im tryin to hit you with a fucking truck..
Ehhhh


Ancel wins Easily....

weak battle though from you both

[The Seven]

such a nice breakdown from immac ima have to copy paste it... just from a glance this is too close to vote it till i score the bars...

Cinizter
I make ground beef of this burger King for all his random sinning
with stellar wordplays...watch me (c)ancel his chance of winning
aighht word play..little corny 6/10
I roll with the punches, the type that leave holes in ya chest
See, your verse started with nothing and still got most of it left
lol...simple but nice 7/10
I'ma rip this fiend cause on any scale I rate sick and mean
Kill this faggot in style like doing drive-by's in limousines
psss...played...4/10
Snatching your raggedy mic cause your bars are plain dyslexic
Ya verse was the first time I needed subtitles for a text message!
kinda funny 6/10
Your family tree consists of weak bitches and lame fucks
ya mother's son got talent....
thats cause Networth been steppin his game up.
is that even a punch? lol... 3/10

26/50



King Ancel
see you like to flip lines...well bro that won't help you win
you must be baptized, the way your NEVER original cin'
solid... 6/10
bitch give up on it, HIM. this dude's a hoe, no good lines
his future's lookin dim...
....but that makes sense with his lines.
bah shoulda rhymed this to him dim and made it a multy 5/10
10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
lol...7/10
AND you suck, back it up. i don't have to smack this fuck
this could be dumb luck, or any other way to say you winnins whack as fuck
pfffft 5/10
i dont need a closer bitch, your closed wounds r opened up
so fuck swingin fists im tryin to hit you with a fucking truck..
zzzz 5/10

28/50

cin had kinda a nice rhythm, but too steady for hip hop.. id say to raise the bar on your cadence complexity.. theres alot i liked about your drop, you just got outdone here conceptwise, and i thought king had a little better flow... more interesting rhythm.. little fresher wordplay and stuff... pretty close

V/king

[Ctrl Alt Elite]

Cin;

I make ground beef of this burger King for all his random sinning
with stellar wordplays...watch me (c)ancel his chance of winning
- k
I roll with the punches, the type that leave holes in ya chest
See, your verse started with nothing and still got most of it left
- meh
I'ma rip this fiend cause on any scale I rate sick and mean
Kill this faggot in style like doing drive-by's in limousines
-lol meh
Snatching your raggedy mic cause your bars are plain dyslexic
Ya verse was the first time I needed subtitles for a text message!
-ok
Your family tree consists of weak bitches and lame fucks
ya mother's son got talent....
thats cause Networth been steppin his game up.
-decent, i liked


King Ancel;

see you like to flip lines...well bro that won't help you win
you must be baptized, the way your NEVER original cin'
-nahh
bitch give up on it, HIM. this dude's a hoe, no good lines
his future's lookin dim...
....but that makes sense with his lines.
-naww
10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
-ok
AND you suck, back it up. i don't have to smack this fuck
this could be dumb luck, or any other way to say you winnins whack as fuck
-No not feelin'
i dont need a closer bitch, your closed wounds r opened up
so fuck swingin fists im tryin to hit you with a fucking truck..
-no??


Don't think i am allowed to vote due to crew rule, but if i could vote, i think i would give it to Cin... his verse was stronger IMO and the punches seemed more creative. Final bar of cins was best in the battle... so either luck and immac dont understand it or they dont like you much lol.

Weak battle

[iBeastOut]

opener: cinizter
multies: cinizter
wordplay/nameplay: cinizter
flow/structure: cinizter
metaphors: king ancel
punches: cinizter
personals: none
closer: cinizter


overall: cinizter, weak battle lol.

[Rant]

LMAO....upppin.

[BlitSs]

That was horrible no offence.

[A. Diction]

lol @ this..Ancel's first bar owned Cin's whole verse, very nice nameplay...I'm not breaking down verses cause this wasn't a lopsided battle, but it was definately close...Ancel had the fresher concepts, the closest thing to nameplay Cin had was the cancel line, and that's not wordplay or nameplay, just cause Ancel is in cancel and you put the c in paranthesis doesn't do anything...really...

Vote = Ankle

[vampz]

lol ancel took this if u want me to break this down then lemme know
and wtf happened to you vince? you used to be so dope
maybe it was the fact that you were biting all the time and then admitted elsewhere you were banned for biting lol fool..

10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
that bar was cool (botb)

[Rant]

up............

[Rant]

closing vote?

[sikmaster]

I make ground beef of this burger King for all his random sinning
with stellar wordplays...watch me (c)ancel his chance of winning
ehh u just put the c there lol not really word play
I roll with the punches, the type that leave holes in ya chest
ok
I'ma rip this fiend cause on any scale I rate sick and mean
Kill this faggot in style like doing drive-by's in limousines
ehhh nah
Snatching your raggedy mic cause your bars are plain dyslexic
Ya verse was the first time I needed subtitles for a text message!
ehh nah
Your family tree consists of weak bitches and lame fucks
ya mother's son got talent....
thats cause Networth been steppin his game up.
thats a coo bar if there brothers


i see you like to flip lines...well bro that won't help you win
you must be baptized, the way your NEVER original cin'
aite
bitch give up on it, HIM. this dude's a hoe, no good lines
his future's lookin dim...
....but that makes sense with his lines.
no
10 for you? it's what ever, i'll cut this bitch up like shredder
my verse is like chain mail...'cause your closer to death with every letter
pretty good
AND you suck, back it up. i don't have to smack this fuck
this could be dumb luck, or any other way to say you winnins whack as fuck
nah
i dont need a closer bitch, your closed wounds r opened up
so fuck swingin fists im tryin to hit you with a fucking truck..
ehhh


not a real good battle but very close at the same time i think ancel took it though