Weekly Topic Challenge (Week 3)

[Vallus]

Guidelines

Last week had a small turnout so let's get some more heads
writing on this week's challenge...It's for fun so just key something
for fun with the focus on how theres a lack of pressure when writing
since it's not tournament oriented or a league it's okay to drop
whatever you want, keyed or pre-written, in the crew or not.
Main idea is to get people active, and get your creativity going
if it isn't that high at the moment...


Rules

Doesn't matter if your in D.A. or not..it's cool to drop
You can post pics with the weeks topic to go with your
verse just use tact and don't make them huge...
The max lines allowed are 30, the minimum is 10
This week's challenge will end on Friday at midnight.
DO NOT FREEPOST IN THIS THREAD


This Weeks Topic

Listen to Wisdom


Remember....be creative, and have fun

[Costa.]

Alrighty. *Saved*

[A. Diction]

LMAO ^ He freeposted...I'll edit this with my verse, fuck you V!

[Uben. Sonned]

The people of this land, we've left earth tarnished
Soil feels no remores, as the noose is harnesed.
Prophecies predicted the turmoil, left unnoticed
Petals falling in agony, see the tears of the lotus.
With each creation, we damage our exsistence
Engulfed the depths, after enough persistence.
Artificial hormones, producing mutalated crops
With intelligence failing, the truth is forever lost.
Lead to the slaughter, humanity is devoured
Whilest the ground lays crippled by cowards.
She speaks to us all shrieking with a howl
Now facing extinction, eviction comes growls.
Listen to wisdim, mother natures warning us
For all the pain inflicted, shes scorning us.
Sheding her tears in the forms of acidic rain
I never knew of humans who exhibit shame.

[Vallus]

Sometimes I cant figure out how to walk with my story...
...but I know one thing
I can always learn a thing or two from an old head puttin salt in his 40
Told my boy the otherday not to marry that chick, she's tramps around
He didn't listen now the bitch got his car, & half his house
My dude didnt listen when I advised him to stow the coke scales
No he's so pale in a cold cell with no bail....
Fuck man, just trying tell a young head shit learned from experience, V worked
Back when I was on the block in the rain in nothin but jeans n a T shirt
My brother talkin about how he's gonna make mad loot when the slab pays out
Last dude I know that said that got both legs in a halfway house
Tellin my people to carry on like a soldier, if u cant stay sober drop the piff
Cuz then it's taking over your life like a bid from the cops or pigs
Lotsa bids later, I wish dudes would listen and stick with weed, stop sniffin &
Alot of friends didnt listen and OD'd with no one to take em to a hospital man
My mind goes far away sometimes when I tryin put wisdom on young head
Whose more worried about his dumb threads and sluts heads
Then tryin elevate his life in an environment filled with slugs n death
Fuck a check, I want to make my own money when V gets paid
But dudes stay tryin rob for dues n make they money the easy way....

[Lelouch]

I watch as time shifts
Into a beautiful woman
But the image doesnt fit
Im trying to calculate the numbers
As the knife,
Caresses into my scalp
Damaging the part of my brain
Which controls my eardrums,
So i hear, nor see nothing...
How can i
Listen To Wisdom?

[Rant]

every step seems like a mile,
some say that i walk the coldest path,
and the trail is longer then the nile...
but i fear there's no turning back.
they tell me that i need to listen,
they tell me that i need to try harder
but i see the way her eye's glisten,
and i pray to god with 'our father'
my life is like a prison cell,
only with the freedom and noone cares
and most would say im livin' well
but i fear that i'm going nowhere
see they couldn't hold me back from her
i want her body more then anything
im on her side like im strapped to her
but her laugh is just so menacing.
my family told me to leave the girl,
but noww she's got me in the system...
and now these bars are my world...
guess i should've listened to wisdom.

[Hank McCoy]

Listen to Wisdom

A wise man once said.............................................. .........?


Exactly...

Listen Up:

A thought has escaped what is ancient and holy
scriptures manifested in the paper that's folding
escape what your knowing,capitalise on your punishment
don't dwell on the past when the future is done with it
it's an establishment,covenant,you could be quick to discover it
assumptions make false accusastions when the label & cover flip
with routes tied as plain as the government,it's opt to be fatal
just like when death is un rooted & quickly brought to the table
it's thought as a fable,not as a tale,but the fact is it's fact
so like footprints in the snow you can't uncover the tracks
& as for the way?...there is no other than back
so attempt to move forward if your stuck in a trap
love what you had,but just leave it behind
because whats ahead will be repeated & climbed
if you seek what you find..than the meanings divine
so when your put against the clock
Just remember "Listen To Wisdom" before your defeated with time

[Erun.]

My mom always told me to be careful with females
Pay attention to detail, quit chasing them sleaze tales
When you chase girls you lose out on the green backs
But…
When you chase money girls flock cause they see that
So much time wasted tasting cuisine and buying gifts
Parallel thoughts of: this girl’s the one I’m dying with
Mom always told me to put my head in books and learn
But…
Getting head and good looks became my main concern
She says, you live and learn so turn this life around
Before she could turn around I was wife n pussy bound

[Vallus]

good turnout...why freepost and say you'll edit?...just clogging the thread fools
post a verse or don't...it's simple

this will be extended by a few hours...it'll close around noon
in case anyone edits their verse in....

[Vallus]

alright...you can close this
just leave it up for the poll that I'm making in the votes thread
until the votes for the weeks winner are in