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This is for them shape shifting, sack dippen, wallet watchen, mutha fuckers!!!
Thinkin they got game when all they play on is the suckas.
Here’s my dick choke as you suck. Forget them balls you get stuck
Don’t ask if I gives a fuck while on your knees don’t test your luck
There’s only one way to keep goin and that’s at keep blowen
Treat a bitch just like a bitch you fucken slut I better nutt!!!!
Now, for them Wink and Smile, while all the while knifin, mutha fuckas!!!
Sweet talkin face to face then debone your back in front of others.
Ya like followen my back where the view never change??
You can take the sack the shape shifter couldn’t rearrange
Trick don’t duck and weave, Once they start they swang
Guzzle up to the taint, nuzzle cup em’ don’t let em’ hang!!!
Grin that shit eating grin and be happy your just a little stained.
You were never worth the time… I was helpin you to maintain!
And here’s for the snitchen, honor missin, done gone heathon, mutha fuckas!!!
Bringin shame to the reign of family’s built on fathers and of mothers.
You got a special place under the covers,, so wrong you lovers
I care not the place they go nor will I let my rhyme follow flow
But, it’s here I let you know for them I got an uncle ready in store
Now, take that to court,,, its you fucken people they should deport!!!
I’m not talken on the gay’s I’m talken to those makin a fucked up maze
Eyes coverd over cloudy, Ears and mind closed loudly they lost the ways
Not knowing what they fell in was MY SHIT I skeeted from all my rage!!!
I’m callen out to all of ya’ll!! Go snatch you up any seedy bitch deceiver!!!!
Don’t stall or you’ll fall to shady maybes,,,, left so cold ya shake and shiver.
Flex they stunt and pull they front ,,,,smile and watch how quick they quiver.
Off to the “Bye And Bye” One less they bless the quest of a bloody sinner.
Hell is hot,, even in winter. and shells are shot,, even by a rooky beginner !!!
This is so far the best I've been able to break my old poetic style and flip rhyme. No beat was used but a bottle of Jim was. Hours have been invested in this bc the few poems I shared were entierly looked over and the much needed feed back wasnt comming.
Basically I don't know what Im doing wrong to cause such a "turn off" in ppl. Positive or negative critisizm will be taken and used. PLS POST