just a verse... cryptic wisdom on the chorus.
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just a verse... cryptic wisdom on the chorus.
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you mixing sounds a little off. like theres a little too much bass. not sure what it is
you ever heard of grieves? if not check him out hes dope. you remind me a lot of him
flow is on point, doesn't switch up but it works out
nice track man keep it up
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it's so strange, it wasn't this "bass-heavy" on my monitors/headphones.. I'll be sure to EQ it again for the final version
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cool hook, liked the beat, u have some good lyrics, flow was pretty good, delivery as well, nice ish, could have another verse in it
love this beat
flowed nice on it
coo vibe overall
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First off the beat is really awesome. The chorus fits great, and It sounds really good too. The lyrics to the verse are decently good, but the mixing of the vocals in the verse is pretty bad. It sounds muddy and its just not very good sounding. Your delivery is good and everything else is great. The main thing i could recomend is just that mixing.
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Beat is sick, and i like the hook, make the mixing of the vocals a lil cleary and less muddy and its on point. gg bro.
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i agree with everyone on the "muddiness" of the vocals..
i re-mixed the vocals a bit, and i am uploading it right now.
Hook sounds good right off the bat for sure.
Flow is pretty decent, mixing sounds a bit on the hi end to me haha.
Delivery could maybe have a bit more energetic but it was good over all.
Whoa it was mad short though.
Definitely could be longer but pretty solid over all man.
Keep it up.
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not feeling the delivery, content was raw tho, vocals do sound a little muddy, tight flow, hook was interesting, good start maybe finish up with a 2nd verse & raise the mids on the vocals (also maybe drop the lows?)
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this remind me of that saigon joint bring me down part II, but a lil different, flow is good, delivery is good but could be upped because it stays the same all the way throughout, i can see the appeal on this track its mad short but you know i think you got more to it just you jus want us to hear the first verse..but word keep working on it, it needs remixing, the vocals do sound too muddy..but this got potential no doubt
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cool voice, flow is nice, alott of people have trouble cause of their voice but this dope mixing is a lil off, just check on several sources before u finalize it. other then that good shit man.
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this hook is sick brah
flow was tight and the delivery was strong
beat was hard definitely complemented the vocals
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