10 lines
due by the end of the night
Art.
xXFresHXx
10 lines
due by the end of the night
24hrs from 2 hours ago***
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You won't walk away from this even though you've got stage fright
This battle will leave you mangled, this really is a grave 'sight'
You're not even half decent, you're the champion of queers
I'll look you straight in your eyes and slap you in your ears
with my palms cuffed so your useless empty head explodes
Terminating this fool like my job was really pest control
Your shit wouldn't flow if you drank 2 bottles of laxative,
You couldn't even beat me if I dissed myself by accident,
How the fuck do you expect to battle me and not take a beating?
Heres a giant ass maxi pad, it should help stop the bleeding
Truth is, the east side slang rhymes. yours are whack!flat, no hang time
So if you ever hear that this kid Fresh Coast, its just TheSaurus thrown up gang signs.
I can tell ur a punk or coward, tryna fly under the radar but witness more power..
so if u tryna keep your style Low key, il guess il just have to hit him with Thors hammer.
Nothin bout u is fly, this maggots gutter? i seen your sig and found a topic i have to cover
Cause if you ever hear Fresh Squeezed Fruit, its just this queer hugging his faggot lover
smack kid til he tragically screams..cause hes a pussy couldn't even handle these schemes
if this dude ever starts manning up….its just Peyton in the line up on his fantasy team
Last line I don't know you and no one does cause people know this guys worthless
so if another member ever says yo thats Fresh, Art, they're just refering to my verses
blah….
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with my palms cuffed so your useless empty head explodes
Terminating this fool like my job was really pest control
vs
Nothin bout u is fly, this maggots gutter? i seen your sig and found a topic i have to cover
Cause if you ever hear Fresh Squeezed Fruit, its just this queer hugging his faggot lover
smack kid til he tragically screams..cause hes a pussy couldn't even handle these schemes
if this dude ever starts manning up….its just Peyton in the line up on his fantasy team
closeee battle but i got art by a bar
v/art
You won't walk away from this even though you've got stage fright
This battle will leave you mangled, this really is a grave 'sight'
weak
You're not even half decent, you're the champion of queers
I'll look you straight in your eyes and slap you in your ears
read these concepts in 2003
with my palms cuffed so your useless empty head explodes
Terminating this fool like my job was really pest control
statement, no punch.
Your shit wouldn't flow if you drank 2 bottles of laxative,
You couldn't even beat me if I dissed myself by accident,
no
How the fuck do you expect to battle me and not take a beating?
Heres a giant ass maxi pad, it should help stop the bleeding
decent, played though.
Fresh, your only good bar was played as a motherfucker. You need to work on your wording because it's really ruining any sign of a punch you may have, everything comes off like a statement. Nothing harsh, nothing solid. Keep battling, and keep elevating.
Vs.
Truth is, the east side slang rhymes. yours are whack!flat, no hang time
So if you ever hear that this kid Fresh Coast, its just TheSaurus thrown up gang signs.
nah
I can tell ur a punk or coward, tryna fly under the radar but witness more power..
so if u tryna keep your style Low key, il guess il just have to hit him with Thors hammer.
doesn't rhyme
Nothin bout u is fly, this maggots gutter? i seen your sig and found a topic i have to cover
Cause if you ever hear Fresh Squeezed Fruit, its just this queer hugging his faggot lover
decent
smack kid til he tragically screams..cause hes a pussy couldn't even handle these schemes
if this dude ever starts manning up….its just Peyton in the line up on his fantasy team
lol, cool
Last line I don't know you and no one does cause people know this guys worthless
so if another member ever says yo thats Fresh, Art, they're just refering to my verses
played but okay
Art, a couple cool concepts. Liked the manning line. Felt you were consistent enough to get the w here.
Vote art for the better verse.
2 voting links each plz
i got you KP gimme til the end of the day.
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Yeah I liked arts, wording better, harder punches in fact I feel fresh talked more shit than anything, art had some good metaphors n wordplay, fresh was more simple but did at least use multis.. Art solid peice, fresh good rap brother but u need more force behind the lines....
Vote art
You won't walk away from this even though you've got stage fright
This battle will leave you mangled, this really is a grave 'sight'
vs
smack kid til he tragically screams..cause hes a pussy couldn't even handle these schemes
if this dude ever starts manning up….its just Peyton in the line up on his fantasy team
v.art.
this battle wasnt all that, lot of misses but i thought he had the better concepts
You won't walk away from this even though you've got stage fright
This battle will leave you mangled, this really is a grave 'sight'
ok
You're not even half decent, you're the champion of queers
I'll look you straight in your eyes and slap you in your ears
ok
with my palms cuffed so your useless empty head explodes
Terminating this fool like my job was really pest control
ok
Your shit wouldn't flow if you drank 2 bottles of laxative,
You couldn't even beat me if I dissed myself by accident,
eh
How the fuck do you expect to battle me and not take a beating?
Heres a giant ass maxi pad, it should help stop the bleeding
eh
Truth is, the east side slang rhymes. yours are whack!flat, no hang time
So if you ever hear that this kid Fresh Coast, its just TheSaurus thrown up gang signs.
ok
I can tell ur a punk or coward, tryna fly under the radar but witness more power..
so if u tryna keep your style Low key, il guess il just have to hit him with Thors hammer.
eh
Nothin bout u is fly, this maggots gutter? i seen your sig and found a topic i have to cover
Cause if you ever hear Fresh Squeezed Fruit, its just this queer hugging his faggot lover
ok
smack kid til he tragically screams..cause hes a pussy couldn't even handle these schemes
if this dude ever starts manning up….its just Peyton in the line up on his fantasy team
Cool
Last line I don't know you and no one does cause people know this guys worthless
so if another member ever says yo thats Fresh, Art, they're just refering to my verses
Swag
V/ Art for creativity
I guess it's just that time...............
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