1-2 Punch League
Week: 3
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
@Cai @Cai @Joe Boston
1-2 Punch League
Week: 3
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
@Cai @Cai @Joe Boston
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Maybe
Cai can't satisfy his bitch no wonder why dudes are passing it back n forth
Once I stick it she'll finally have that smile on her face like Kanye holding North
@Cai good luck
feeling Joe's bar better here, had a bit of lol to it.. could use some rewording but it was a good concept imo. Cai's probably isn't bad, I just don't know who Bowe Bergdahl is so this didn't work for me.
v/jB
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JB- ehhh nothing really special here, mainly a statement.
Cai- this was current & i liked this concept but execution was slacking & indirect.
Overall- Kanye/Kim/North concept are overdone, Cai was more current both lacked direction though.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
Both are more capable than what they have shown here.
Joeboston - I felt the punch lacked in connection and just did not have the zing we would have liked to of seen. The set up appeared a little shaky but did leave room for a comeback, but I felt you dropped the ball and came off a little forced.
Cai - Although your punch was more current, it also lacked in grasping attention. I'm not sure if it was just the wording or the concept in general but it was not a very hard landing punch.
Overall, I give this merely by a hair to Cai.
Vote - Cai
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close one here. felt joe had a decent attempt but the punch wasnt a stinger. cai had a decent flip with ok ending. close but...
v. cai for fresher attempt
opening line concept was meh - ending bar I think was more statement ish and about his girl than him. attempted wordplay / and hit a litt
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see the wordplay here and would of been cool concept if it hit right. the filler in first line though doesn't seem fitting though making the punch seem less hard hitting
v/Cai - to me his concept was fresher and punch hit lightly. therefor I got him taking it
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6-1 Cai
Last edited by Wordz AhGod.; June 6th, 2014 at 09:12 AM
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The kany line didnt tie together very well. Cai had a general current event line so it wasnt played but it was weakly executed
V cai
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