5 bars
Due tomorrow by mid night
Good luck @AKER
Killing spree
Aker
5 bars
Due tomorrow by mid night
Good luck @AKER
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 30th, 2015 at 05:57 AM
Aker
Originally Posted by AKER
See...
Ya soft w/ text, put needles in ya arms & swing, u still nod a threat
& if we see A currency hit? It's on opiates N I hope it's his cause of death
Wen I penne verse? Italian wins so say cheese when the 12 gauge on ya
One squeeze on the bitch'll have the top of ya head look like a plate of lasagna
Ya cypher bars made me Yak! & fueled this beat down to be SO dandy
My hooks so sweet & go pow durin my fights. so let me personally deliver u nose candy
ERry'thin u sable bout child rape. So I'll hunt a hurst cos u dead to me
I'll go @ the site & say fuck these kids! N before I could use the move this pedigree
I'm morbid bitch n ya form is shit... Proof that u so fag
Cos we've seen akrite, but now we use it as an example of No class
my bad about being late didn't see this til about 40 mins ago
I go in on verses w/ the most savage of rights - fag u can't match w/ the hype
We can never say you’ve gone in pussy, considering u’ve never done that in your life
ur the type of rat to stab cats in the back w/ a knife, ur not someone we trust
if u ever see killing spree u know he's leaving his homies to get thrown under the bus
see how that wp was executed? smooth n flawless when the boss is flowin
u force ur wordplay so much you've single handedly destroyed newtons laws of motion
ur frail as fuck sonn u ain't clippin shells, one left hook could ring ya bell
every bar I drops unfukwitable which is fitting since u got knocked out by him as well
pussy u are nothing to handle, ur just a bitch getting thumped in this battle
they say behind every great man is a women so it's no wonder ur stuck in my shadow.
Ready for blind votes.
@Killing Spree @AKER need links
opener was weird. AKER n see hit? I dunno, not feeling it but good attempt
not feeling plate of lasagna
sweet & go pow was ehh, corny. nice attempt tho like ur opener
pedigree was wordy af, had potential tho
akrite was decent
vs
gone in pussy opener was ok, kind of simple
killing spree was ehh
not feeling force ur wordplay
unfuk line was ok, simple af tho
kind of the same as the last bar, simple concept but more effective than most of spree's verse IMO
v/aker
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Killing spree
Ya soft w/ text, put needles in ya arms & swing, u still nod a threat
& if we see A currency hit? It's on opiates N I hope it's his cause of death
ok flip
Wen I penne verse? Italian wins so say cheese when the 12 gauge on ya
One squeeze on the bitch'll have the top of ya head look like a plate of lasagna
didn't like this concept lacked execution
Ya cypher bars made me Yak! & fueled this beat down to be SO dandy
My hooks so sweet & go pow durin my fights. so let me personally deliver u nose candy
didn't like the display of the finisher
ERry'thin u sable bout child rape. So I'll hunt a hurst cos u dead to me
I'll go @ the site & say fuck these kids! N before I could use the move this pedigree
never heard some call a pedophile a ped I heard of pedo it was a good attempt at wordplay though
I'm morbid bitch n ya form is shit... Proof that u so fag
Cos we've seen akrite, but now we use it as an example of No class
setup didn't rhyme but nameplay was ok
Aker
I go in on verses w/ the most savage of rights - fag u can't match w/ the hype
We can never say you’ve gone in pussy, considering u’ve never done that in your life
played flip basic punch
ur the type of rat to stab cats in the back w/ a knife, ur not someone we trust
if u ever see killing spree u know he's leaving his homies to get thrown under the bus
didn't like the flip off the nameplay u coulldve done so much more with the thrown under bus concept
see how that wp was executed? smooth n flawless when the boss is flowin
u force ur wordplay so much you've single handedly destroyed newtons laws of motion
ok
ur frail as fuck sonn u ain't clippin shells, one left hook could ring ya bell
every bar I drops unfukwitable which is fitting since u got knocked out by him as well
ok personal bit basic cuz ive seen these name flip personals before in reference to him
pussy u are nothing to handle, ur just a bitch getting thumped in this battle
they say behind every great man is a women so it's no wonder ur stuck in my shadow.
lol ok
wasn't really feeling execution on killing sprees concepts akrite and pedigree were good attempts. Aker had the newton laws of motion bar,the unfuk personal and his closer.
V/Aker I thought he was slightly more consistent had a little bit more execution on his 3 punches that I chose.
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Spree-this was a decent verse. you had mostly decent jabs but lacked the big haymaker lunches thay win battles. Each bar i was waiting on it...but just jabs. You had some ok concepts but didnt word it as good as it could have been. You've got some original barz but just felt the flow hurt the smoothness of the verse.
Aker- this was a well written verse. You had some dope plays and executed it in a fresh way.
For example:
see how that wp was executed? smooth n flawless when the boss is flowin
u force ur wordplay so much you've single handedly destroyed newtons laws of motion
^^^^^.....this was a hard hitter bruh. Really well thought out punchline.
You kept the pressure on throughout the verse and did more damage the Spree.
Vote- Aker
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Best Lines
Killing:
Ya soft w/ text, put needles in ya arms & swing, u still nod a threat
& if we see A currency hit? It's on opiates N I hope it's his cause of death
Aker:
ur frail as fuck sonn u ain't clippin shells, one left hook could ring ya bell
every bar I drops unfukwitable which is fitting since u got knocked out by him as well
Votes...
Damn. Both are ill! I have to go with Aker. Aker is coming out with crazy punches.
4 votes received
See...
Ya soft w/ text, put needles in ya arms & swing, u still nod a threat
& if we see A currency hit? It's on opiates N I hope it's his cause of death
i see what you did there, but it's not very hard hitting
Wen I penne verse? Italian wins so say cheese when the 12 gauge on ya
One squeeze on the bitch'll have the top of ya head look like a plate of lasagna
Alright
Ya cypher bars made me Yak! & fueled this beat down to be SO dandy
My hooks so sweet & go pow durin my fights. so let me personally deliver u nose candy
Not feeling this
ERry'thin u sable bout child rape. So I'll hunt a hurst cos u dead to me
I'll go @ the site & say fuck these kids! N before I could use the move this pedigree
Meh didn't like this
I'm morbid bitch n ya form is shit... Proof that u so fag
Cos we've seen akrite, but now we use it as an example of No class
Alright
Vs
I go in on verses w/ the most savage of rights - fag u can't match w/ the hype
We can never say you’ve gone in pussy, considering u’ve never done that in your life
This was alright
ur the type of rat to stab cats in the back w/ a knife, ur not someone we trust
if u ever see killing spree u know he's leaving his homies to get thrown under the bus
Not feeling this
see how that wp was executed? smooth n flawless when the boss is flowin
u force ur wordplay so much you've single handedly destroyed newtons laws of motion
Nah this was weak
ur frail as fuck sonn u ain't clippin shells, one left hook could ring ya bell
every bar I drops unfukwitable which is fitting since u got knocked out by him as well
Alright
pussy u are nothing to handle, ur just a bitch getting thumped in this battle
they say behind every great man is a women so it's no wonder ur stuck in my shadow.
again alright
Nothing amazing but he just had decent bars. V Aker
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