16 Lines
Due Whenever You Agree
16 Lines
Due Whenever You Agree
The Last Level
yeah
due w semis/next wk's batts ?
rant on halfname flips
100.
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
& for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
& If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
Last edited by Unfukwitable; January 7th, 2019 at 01:56 AM
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MUSIC VIDEO^
stfu
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
u didnt just adopt an old style...
u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
feel free to edit ur 18 lolll
Last edited by Barcotic; January 7th, 2019 at 12:33 AM
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
not feelin
Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
nooo
No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
nah
He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
i mean it’s decent I suppose
No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
man no are you trolling us?
Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
pretty cool here, worded a bit weird though
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
nah
to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
alright, would’ve been much better if you tied it in directly with GoT
& for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
& If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
no
Vs
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
you’re gonna vent to him? Lol I get the uneventful part but this is corny af
the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
alright
look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
your word choice is so weird like you use terms that literally nobody says. Somebody in the “hall” owed him tips! Lmao foh
he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
super bad
he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
no
all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
u didnt just adopt an old style...
u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
the fuck?
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
this was nice I liked it
u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
decent here
tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
no
Im sorry but this battle fuckin sucked. Next time you guys wanna hype this shit up to be the greatest thing ever, please drop accordingly. Unfuk had a lot of clear misses and irdk whether he’s trolling or not tbh. Barc had a lot of weird and corny stuff but also had a few good lines and decent ones. It’s like y’all were battling for who can drop the worst verse.
Vote Barcotic
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Not even trying to be harsh guys but I thought it would be more fulfilling especially with barc dropping 2 days late
Unfukwitable -
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
This was marginal, could've been a bit better; but was good for what it was.
Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
Pretty dope flip, nice one.
No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
lmao, decent one here.
He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
Lol, this was okay.
No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
Lol, what in the world. decent I suppose.
Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
lmao, this was very nice. good work..
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
LOL, nice one.
to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
lmao, niice one.
& for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
& If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
lool, nice..
Barcoctic -
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
lol, could've been a bit better. but alright..
the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
decent work here..
look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
pretty decent, nice one here..
he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
this was okay I suppose, niice.
he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
LOL, niice one here..
all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
u didnt just adopt an old style...
u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
what in the world..this was okay..
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
lool..niice one..
u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
lmao..niice one..
tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
okay..niice one..
feel free to edit ur 18 lolll
overall - very close battle, difficult to call a winner here. are ties aloud? because that's what I give this..lool..
V/ tie
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VOTE
The Last Level
Well I broke this battle down then my phone died. Not a big fan of all the un partial nameplays but some were clever like undertakers, I like wp like that n used to use it till ppl starting hating cuz of the pause but this is txt, nerds. Un had memes, ferrule, brews and toonami. Bar had low is slain, hallowed tips, unscathed, raw as al woulda been better with a diff flip, undertakers cuz fuck the rest I like that kinda txt, creative but still partial np
Overall bar was more consistent throughout imo
V. Bar
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
Vs
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
u didnt just adopt an old style...
u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
Even though I only quoted three from Bar he was more consistent by far, just didn't care for most of it. Un you had some good concepts but the execution was lacking. You could have made this much closer using the same concepts of you wrote them better. Bar cleaned up here
v/Barcotic
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
VERSUS
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
So yea, this was an interesting battle by two clear and concise veterans who are both clearly masterful in their craft. That being said this battle shouldve been closed verry many months ago, and I think one reason it wasn't was due to the length of the read. luckily it was two names I'd wanted to read otherwise i dont think i couldve made it through. anyway all in all, you both delivered a well contrived battle here with ^^these quotables and it simply came down to enjoyability in the reading of it. Equal mainly throughout I only vote this way because it was more interesting to me to have seen more concepts in multiple areas rather than the constant nameflips(although I think intentional). Bar for Bar it's even imho but
V/ Unfukwitable for a more entertaining drop
Last edited by Networth; August 28th, 2019 at 04:31 PM
5th? or the blade?, U got options but being victim remains,
& me being Ferrule be ya last time meddlin between gettin erased.
Mediocre, multi's not quite connecting.
Seen'em display hate for 'half name flips' on a new post;
Only right I engrave "RIP Cotic" upside down on his tombstone.
Mediocre, rhymes not quite connnecting.
No Pic battles. this Bar guy got the Popeye the Sailor typa swagga;
U thinkin Un-sinkable w/ a face made for 'Maritime' disasters.
Favorite line, flows well and I like the content.
He got dumb excuses for losin rounds, my endurance keep the beasts shook
I do 'long toe to toes' u think u can't fight cus of Greeks foot.
Rhyme on point, mediocre metaphor that flows well.
No Hoes, U got ya 'paper stickin out for kisses', they do u dirty,
She takes $ while u eat the Niggly Wiggly shit hangin out of her Hershey.
Half-decent punch, a little winded.
Were u drinkin reading them Greedy jokes, This nigga 'pouts' proud;
had Brews on his head Ready to Quit he just needed a Street fighter countdown.
Mediocre and winded.
Self-absorb Barcissistic w/o Leagues what is he gon do?,
1st time see'n the wrd "Meme" he thought it was bout him.. & u need 1-2.
I see what you tried to do, but don't feel like it connected.
to Knight,King, & Old timers'stuck w/ Barc...his weak lifes taken;
He on the ground w/ his eye's rollin back like he channeling the Three eyed raven.
I'm feeling this mid evil bar, and rhyme scheme works.
& for the Bitchin u better Nominate my battles frm here forth & on....
& If you're scared 'Toonami' Next episode u have is w/ a talking T.O.M
And a mediocre finish.
-VS-
all the hate is worthless, for yrs i been murkin the dope/elite
i cud give Un a vent full.. but thats what his verses are known to be
Mediocre, flows better.
the chat'll show hes lame, showing rattled n afraid traits
id say Un's caved.. and ima be leaving this battle in the same state
Mediocre, but flow and rhyme a bit tighter.
look cunts, u shudve seen the msgs this crook once used to send
thought smbdy in the hall-owed-tips to him, now ill put 1 thru his head
I see the reference but weak punch and poor rhyme scheme.
he a gangster irl? LUDICROUS! ill come thru n shoot his cliq...
make sure anyone layin Lois Lane for bein accociated w a super bitch
Favorite line. Decent multi rhyme and metaphor.
he used to be str8 af but now hes buckled n very elastic
i got 'Un dirt. acres' of it n hes gona need a cpl to carry the casket
Decent bar, rhymes connect.
all ur lines are replicas. ya i said it, its a fatal mistake
u didnt just adopt an old style...
The set up, let's see the punch.
u kidnapped it, broke both legs & fed it a potato a day
w/ skills declining u finna get KILLED for trying w bar
The punch connects. You kidnapped that style and held it ransom feeding it a potato a day! Dope.
ironically u'll go from run of the mill to buying the farm
u dont let the cans off. this mans not a thug
im aimin at an 'eye vs Un' aka the whole bands on his mug
Decent, at least it flows and a bit of rhyming.
tryna be ak w sports bars all kosher but u wack fam
ur not as Ra's Al, but u were a poser off the bat man
Mediocre finish. Rhyme is there. Metaphor but not strong.
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Not 100% what happen with the # of bars. Regardless this is how I see it. Barcotic had the better flow and rhyme scheme. Barcotic overall had the better punchlines, metaphors, and multiples. Overall Barcotic won this battle in my opinion.
Vote: Barcotic