Blais "Rockin in the Dope Game"

[Blais]

a lil ditty bout the shit ass racist town in wisconsin i live in, the good news is were taking a trip to l.a next weekend and a few weekends after that, moving to denver colorado, so fuck the hataz, rise above, love u guys, please give feed i need it













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[XV47]

Greetings,

First, there is really nothing bad quality wise I can hear with this. I am not by my monitor speakers tho. I liked the effects on your voice. I enjoyed the beat as well. The only issue I hear is with your delivery. It seems rushed in places. Try slowing it down and starting lines/rhyme schemes on the kick. That may help you.

Second, I live in Denver Colorado. Great town and very progressive. I think you will like it. Very diverse well educated folks here. That's why I moved here 8 years ago. We accept everyone annnnddd Guns and Weed are legal here. Sorry you have to deal with racist, but i'm glad you have a creative outlet to address it.

Finally, keep making music and use your artform in the way it was intended. You do and I commend you for that. Like I said above, you just need to tweak your delivery. That's all Thanks for sharing.

Bong, bong