WK28 CHAMP MATCH: Bag Mandela (3-0) vs MV (16-13) (MV WINS)

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela
@mv

[Bag Mandela]

Your bars always popped, but recently that's sorta stopped,
I saw M-bark his craft looking shaky, and I knew he was falling off

[MV]

u'd shit urself if i come thro for ya funds, shoot u with a 22 to make it more worse
fuck around i'll dump a little strap on bag and this fag will empty his coin purse

[Virbius]

I got Bag winning this, I preferred the integration of the wordplay in his. MV’s was decent too, but I’ve already used the Bag / no strap wordplay before in a better bar IMO (eg. that was clutch), so it’s hard for me to get excited about this one.

Vote- Bag

Edit to add: MV reached out to explain that coin purse is a euphemism for anus, which I didn’t realise. The bar’s more interesting than I gave it credit for but I think I still have Bag slightly ahead.

[Meks.]

Bag -
Good concept, well crafted no pun intended, just the execution or maybe the wording just didn't land or really hit hard enough at the end of it.

Mv, couple decent plays in the bar, pretty straight forward but the adverse to bags bar is the smoothness of the connection and landing


Vote - MV

[Lady Poet]

This is tough because both punchlines tight
I felt like bag punchline deeper compare to MV

vote-Bag

[Chree]

u'd shit urself if i come thro for ya funds, shoot u with a 22 to make it more worse
fuck around i'll dump a little strap on bag and this fag will empty his coin purse


Good slant rhyme had a little fluff but it was clearly better in cadence and set up. (it also has a spondee) which is pretty rare.


Your bars always popped, but recently that's sorta stopped,
I saw M-bark his craft looking shaky, and I knew he was falling off

This seemed like you didnt care much. I've seen better from you. The first line had a good set up but the second part was very fluffy and lacked the comedy of a punchline.


Vote - MV

[Unfukwitable]

One bar was a good idea with the Mbark flip but it didn’t land strong for me the other flip was less creative more structured to me, I’ve scene much better from both but maybe since the sites activity is alil ass yall don’t wanna show fire fire bars no more

V/MV

[FaQEyeReddit]

Damn I usually love BAGs 1-2 but this time I’ll give it to Mv even though a lot are saying it’s cliche it still hits imo


V/mv

[KnoXville.]

Vote - Bags, I enjoyed the embark tree reference cool MV had a decent
Swing but I don’t see much sting factor in either so it came down to who swung better
I got bags by a small margin.

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MV wins 4-2