RW WK4: HEK TEAFY vs Unfukwitable (FEEDBACK)

[Bag Mandela]

Regular Battle
Bars due Saturday 16th Nov
Public voting closes Monday
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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6 lines each (doesn’t have to be 3 bars with a set up, punch format, you have creative freedom)



Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
Rebuttals, late drops (unless you have a 24hr ext) & no shows are an instant loss.

MV & I will reach a conclusion on bar of the week & the winner will receive $20 to purchase a small quantity of narcotics.

@HEK TEAFY @Unfukwitable

[HEK TEAFY]

checkiddy check

[HEK TEAFY]

aye yo...


I got the NUN CHUCKS AND BELTS and in 'Christmas spirit' Santa'll give him a beating while his 'MUM FUCKS AN ELF'!!
the YOUNG BUCK JUST SMELLS! it must be DUMB LUCK HIS FELT, so like 'self improvement books' go "UNFUCK YASELF"!!..
WORD TO THE WISE I'm 'dropping shit' like BIRDS IN THE SKY, 'teas cold as ice' call it SERBIAN CHAI!!
don't get CHIRPY AND SMILE when my punches have ya 'guts feeling' like ya do BURPIES IN TRIALS!!..
Finally mods know you SUCK DICK with SLUT LIPS!, Ima hit him with 'positive punches' that's how I "UPLIFT"!!
You'll never get on the mic and CUT SICK coz if we drop the "unable" you wind up just being a "FUCK WIT"!!..



-There's a self help book called go unfuck ya self about changing ya life
- if you take the un and able out of his name your left with fuck wit

[HEK TEAFY]

another ns

[Bag Mandela]

Not bad at all HEK, I don't think the Americans have "fuck wit" in their vocabulary so that might've gone over some heads. Uplift bar was pretty fly too, shame you got no showed, although getting a no show W against someone I had in my top 5 to win this isn't a bad thing. @Unfukwitable been battling every week so hopefully it's just this week he's missed & not dropped out completely.

I'll leave this open for feedback tiln next battles are dropped.

[MV]

Not bad at all HEK, I don't think the Americans have "fuck wit" in their vocabulary so that might've gone over some heads. Uplift bar was pretty fly too, shame you got no showed, although getting a no show W against someone I had in my top 5 to win this isn't a bad thing. @Unfukwitable been battling every week so hopefully it's just this week he's missed & not dropped out completely.

I'll leave this open for feedback tiln next battles are dropped.

nope.we have fuck with on that side of the pond also.

first bar was pretty dope. the punch was light the the multies had a nice flow.

i didnt really care too much for the second bar. your closer was solid. this was a very heterosexual battle